CayCay Godwin Poet Rondeau

CAR THAT LOVED ME

Saw sale sign and car impulse tapped me.
The allurement and chance trapped me.
An orange-red gripping gleamer
transformed me to a car dreamer.
	With this Z-car I could soar free.

Me and that Z are meant to be.
I shall call the seller and see
If he’s honest or a schemer.
	I love this car.

Driving the Z, now owned by me,
I’m high on adrenaline glee.
Sexy shape, lush lines, hot screamer,
A driving fervor redeemer!
Shifting, I zoom my Z-she-spree.
	I love this car.

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John Hamilton January 11, 2016 at 6:23 AM What a coincidence! I had a 1976 280Z not a good mix for an 18 year old! Learned a lot of hard lessons but it was fun! Enjoyed this!

Skat A January 10, 2016 at 11:39 PM Hi CayCay, Congrats on your win. Love * SKAT *

Poet Destroyer A January 10, 2016 at 10:36 PM CayCay :) Congratulations on your awesome win. ""You showed me yours-- now's my turn to show you mine --- LADIES"" Stop by my latest blog if you'd like. I have no poem to share under this topic. In which you wrote bravely. I'd like to share photos of my BUDDY (car).......... Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Arthur Vaso January 1, 2016 at 5:17 PM Do not worry CayCay, I kind of jump around by random too and often miss people, With many fine poets never enough time to read all, but over the holidays I had a bit more time and I really enjoyed being able to browse around and read! Hugs

James Inman December 29, 2015 at 9:24 PM Nice write, CayCay. CayCay Godwin January 1, 2016 at 5:12 PM Thank you, James. I like your pic - my eyes aren't the best, but it looks Chrismassy to me - a present, I think (sometimes I like what I think I see better than what is actually there.) Happy New Year ... CayCay

Arthur Vaso December 25, 2015 at 11:40 PM I loved the line "If he’s honest or a schemer." we will have to wait a few months to find out! If he was a schemer be fun to read that poem too! :) Hugs and Merry Christmas CayCay Godwin January 1, 2016 at 5:11 PM You wrote me on Christmas Day! How special. Thank you, Arthur - forgive me for not coming by your page as often as I'd like. Seems no matter how much time I spend here, I just can't keep up. Hugging you back ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich December 25, 2015 at 3:38 PM You are like me, sweetie. I feel SO GOOD behind the wheel of a COOL car. I truly miss mine. I think I will write about my either my white Mustang or my tan Mitubisi Eclipse. both were convertibles and I swear I am gonna get another one by the time I retire. Merry Xmas, my dear friend CayCay Godwin January 1, 2016 at 5:10 PM I read yours yesterday, but need to go back and comment. I thank you for the comments, enjoyed reading them ... CayCay

Emile Pinet December 23, 2015 at 12:45 PM This interesting and formidable style works well to create the ambiance this piece spins in the readers mind. Emile. CayCay Godwin January 1, 2016 at 5:09 PM Thank you, Emile and Happy New Year ... CayCay