Car 54

Officers Toody and Muldoon One a cherub; the other a goon Where are you, O, number fifty-four car ~ Painting a rainbow, swinging on a star

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Sandra Adams

Date: 6/24/2021 9:08:00 AM

lol thanks now all i hear in my head is car 54 where are you... not where they are supposed to be me thinks... enjoyed your write! hugs

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/25/2021 3:57:00 PM

I think Car 54 is now Drone 55.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 6/22/2021 7:17:00 PM

As I recall, they probably are, Gershon. Or, they may be holed up in donut shop.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/23/2021 6:41:00 PM

Ha, ha! Very clever, Milt. Took me a moment to get it. Holy Donuts, Batman! ~ Robin