Captured

I remember that night as if it were yesterday,
sitting and watching your chest moving rhythmically 
up and down as you took each breath.
Your face was that of tranquillity.
Your cheeks were scarlet from spending hours 
on the beach in the November wind. 
As your little eyelids began dancing in the moon lit room,
I couldn’t help but wish I was there in your dream.
The skylight allowed the moonbeams to shine down on you
and you were that night; my star.
I rushed to get my video camera to capture this rare moment.
Then sat there filming you, not wanting this serene moment to end.
Soon my son, you shall graduate from university.
So much has been lost since then, and the video?
Yet still when I close my eyes, I can see you there,
that warm feeling wells up once again in my breast, 
and that night has become one of the most 
treasured moments of my life.
It has been branded in my heart and soul forever.

Written by Brenda Meier-Hans
01.2013
Contest: A poem you have not entered in a contest #12
Poet Destroyer A
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Haight Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 10:46 AM
Brenda, congratulations on your wonderful win for your beautiful poem. You presented an amazing scene of the extraordinary love of a mother. I felt like I was sitting there with you in that captured special moment in time. 7+Fav, Hugs, Sandra
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January 1, 2015 at 9:39 AM
Congrats on your win, Brenda. Such a nostalgic piece. Somehow a video doesn't capture the feelings of that moment. Years later, so much intervenes in enhance the emotions. Love to watch my grandson sleeping; love to watch his older brother settled too, peace at last.
Allison Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 8:59 AM
Oh so glad you entered this as I missed it first time round - beautifully tender write my friend - congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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January 1, 2015 at 8:15 AM
- A contest that I had forgotten - Congratulations your wonderful winning and touching written poem, dear Brenda - Happy New Year !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Yvonne Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 9:35 PM
Congratulations Brenda on your win with this touching piece.
Kayode Avatar
December 31, 2014 at 9:08 PM
Congrats on your fine win and happy new year my friend Brenda...huggs
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December 31, 2014 at 8:54 PM
Brenda,, thank you for supporting my contest. I'm taking this time to enjoy and invite you on over to my latest contest "Busted." Drop by if you'd like or have the time. Take Care, and enjoy the 2015... Happy new Year... Love Linda
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