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Capture the Moment

There is a singular moment when the Sunset is at its most brilliant…. Just before the color begins to fade, Still lovely but past its prime. A moment the wave is at its crest, Just before it plunges into oblivion. To capture the force of nature repeated, but never exactly the same. The second before a smile fades And the mirror reflects insincerity The instant the breeze lifts the leaf just so, before the hurricane unleashed.. These seconds are priceless, The genius of capturing them Is art that shines with triumph…. The knowing, the feeling of time. To capture the moment with poetry The time that words drip like honey. They come unfettered like quicksilver… A gift to take, and then honor the giver.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/18/2009 5:11:00 PM
Bravo! Barbara. A wonderfully written poem with such depth of thought. Capturing each moment in life is essential to our appreciation of the simple things of life--things that many seem to take for granted. Your poems encourages us to enjoy life's blessings with a thankful mindset. Marvelous piece of art!
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Date: 11/17/2009 1:47:00 PM
You captured the moment so beautifully--lovely poem--Charma
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Date: 11/17/2009 12:11:00 PM
The beauty of your poem matches the beauty of the sunset you describe Barbara. I love the way you match this with the second befor a smile fades. This is a beautiful metaphoric illustration. Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 11/17/2009 8:23:00 AM
Oh, I really like this one, Barb! Lots of talent shown. Love, daver
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Date: 11/16/2009 8:14:00 PM
'The instant the breeze lifts the leaf just so'...Have mercy!! VERY good stuff for sure, Barbara - Tim
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Date: 11/16/2009 4:09:00 PM
the imagry is beautiful in this, i can perfectly picture everything you discribe, great poem. thanks for commenting "chase me" i edited it a bit and added a stanza, check it out n let me know what u think of the addition if you want. - love chamy
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Date: 11/13/2009 3:47:00 PM
Beautiful Barabara.. excellent write and descriptive verses.. so enjoyed and the last verse regarding poetry... "words drip like honey" .. superb... thankxx for sharing.. u give all of us inspiration.. luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/11/2009 1:55:00 PM
Beautiful poem from a beautiful heart, loved this one Barbara >> James
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Date: 11/11/2009 12:09:00 AM
Indeed BG,trying to capture them in paint/pen is our task.Love the inner poem of the last verse.Thank you for your kind words and comments today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 11/10/2009 8:50:00 PM
A beautiful way to remind the reader how important each moment truly is. The last stanza seals it up so nicely. Wonderful writing; true poetry. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 11/10/2009 8:50:00 PM
We honor you, Barbara, for the gifts you share here. You are the genius who've captured this concept in your well-penned work of art. Hugs, Donna
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Date: 11/10/2009 8:46:00 PM
Dearest Barbara, Barbeeg,Very Deep and sincere You seem "To capture the moment with poetry" Extreemly well done I bow to YOUR Talented Pen LOVE ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 11/10/2009 8:14:00 PM
Very nice poem...enjoyed reading tonight...Marty
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