Capture the Moment

There is a singular moment when the 
Sunset is at its most brilliant….
Just before the color begins to fade,
Still lovely but past its prime.


A moment the wave is at its crest,
Just before it plunges into oblivion.
To capture the force of nature
repeated, but never exactly the same.

The second before a smile fades
And the mirror reflects insincerity
The instant the breeze lifts the leaf
just so, before the hurricane unleashed..

These seconds are priceless,
The genius of capturing them
Is art that shines with triumph….
The knowing, the feeling of time.

To capture the moment with poetry
The time that words drip like honey.
They come unfettered like quicksilver…
A gift to take, and then honor the giver.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Malloy Avatar
November 18, 2009 at 5:11 PM
Bravo! Barbara. A wonderfully written poem with such depth of thought. Capturing each moment in life is essential to our appreciation of the simple things of life--things that many seem to take for granted. Your poems encourages us to enjoy life's blessings with a thankful mindset. Marvelous piece of art!
Chircop Avatar
November 17, 2009 at 1:47 PM
You captured the moment so beautifully--lovely poem--Charma
Freeman Avatar
November 17, 2009 at 12:11 PM
The beauty of your poem matches the beauty of the sunset you describe Barbara. I love the way you match this with the second befor a smile fades. This is a beautiful metaphoric illustration. Sincerely, Love, Moses
Austin Avatar
November 17, 2009 at 8:23 AM
Oh, I really like this one, Barb! Lots of talent shown. Love, daver
Ryerson Avatar
November 16, 2009 at 8:14 PM
'The instant the breeze lifts the leaf just so'...Have mercy!! VERY good stuff for sure, Barbara - Tim
Knowles Avatar
November 16, 2009 at 4:09 PM
the imagry is beautiful in this, i can perfectly picture everything you discribe, great poem. thanks for commenting "chase me" i edited it a bit and added a stanza, check it out n let me know what u think of the addition if you want. - love chamy
Sweetheart Avatar
November 13, 2009 at 3:47 PM
Beautiful Barabara.. excellent write and descriptive verses.. so enjoyed and the last verse regarding poetry... "words drip like honey" .. superb... thankxx for sharing.. u give all of us inspiration.. luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
Fraser Avatar
November 11, 2009 at 1:55 PM
Beautiful poem from a beautiful heart, loved this one Barbara >> James
Strand Avatar
November 11, 2009 at 12:09 AM
Indeed BG,trying to capture them in paint/pen is our task.Love the inner poem of the last verse.Thank you for your kind words and comments today.Rgds Brian
Golden Avatar
November 10, 2009 at 8:50 PM
We honor you, Barbara, for the gifts you share here. You are the genius who've captured this concept in your well-penned work of art. Hugs, Donna
Townsend Avatar
November 10, 2009 at 8:50 PM
A beautiful way to remind the reader how important each moment truly is. The last stanza seals it up so nicely. Wonderful writing; true poetry. Smiles from Lolita
Esquire Avatar
November 10, 2009 at 8:46 PM
Dearest Barbara, Barbeeg,Very Deep and sincere You seem "To capture the moment with poetry" Extreemly well done I bow to YOUR Talented Pen LOVE ALWAYS...HG
Owens Avatar
November 10, 2009 at 8:14 PM
Very nice poem...enjoyed reading tonight...Marty
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