Captivating Moments - Hiku

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*Image of The Leaf is Falling Real Estate is Not by Shorewest Realtors. captivating moments free falling leaf liberal spun air floats~~ grounded for life 2022 January 13

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/14/2022 6:13:00 PM

A fantastic ending to this beautiful hiku William. Congratulations on your top win! Blessings and Aloha, Connie xxoo

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/14/2022 7:09:00 PM

My dear Connie, I am grateful for your wondrous courtesies and kind laudations. Stay safe my friend, ke Akua pu!

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/14/2022 2:22:00 PM

A wonderful hiku, William! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/14/2022 7:00:00 PM

Thank you, Kim, for your thoughtful expressions. Stay safe my friend, Aloha!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/13/2022 10:50:00 AM

Hello Rico, when the leaves fall they stay grounded. Until we rake them. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/14/2022 11:44:00 AM

Hello William, sorry i got the name wrong. I do enjoy your Hailu. Sometimes i do get the name wrong. Aloha! Darlene

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/13/2022 4:52:00 PM

Hi, Darlene, it's William here appreciating your analyses of my hiku/haiku. I once mistook Jenna for Janice, but I do not know the whereabouts in Hawaii Rico resides at. Stay safe my friend, Aloha!

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/13/2022 8:59:00 AM

Nicely written, Hiku, William. You captured a beautiful and sensitive scene—kindest regards, dear friend.

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/13/2022 10:00:00 AM

Lasaad, you have my gratitude for your assessments, keep safe, Aloha!