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Captivating Love

Must you leave again?
Your strong, capable hands 
rest naturally upon my
curvaceous hips
masculine against feminine.

My world explodes with your
seductive, electrifying touch
as your inquiring blue eyes
penetrate mine so deeply.

Knowingly, you scan every 
inch of my body and face.
I melt, as your well formed
lips curve into a faint smile
as you explore with restraint.

My hands glide over your
tanned, muscled arms
feeling secure, as they 
wrap around my small frame.

I silently plead, stay with me
always, and never let me go. 
Must you leave again?




Written on 3/7/2016

Copyright © Laura Leiser | Year Posted 2016

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Jan Allison Date: 3/18/2016 8:23:00 PM very romantic and passionate write Laura congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 3/18/2016 10:27:00 PM Thanks, Jan! I was surprised it did well, as I rarely write about romance!

Eve Roper Date: 3/18/2016 6:49:00 PM Congratulations on your win!!!!!!Hugs Eve Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 3/18/2016 10:26:00 PM Thank you, Eve :)

Sandra Haight Date: 3/18/2016 8:58:00 AM Beautifully written, Laura. Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 3/18/2016 10:26:00 PM Thank you very much, Sandra :)

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 3/18/2016 3:40:00 AM Laura, I really admire the way you begin and end your newest poem. I makes a more powerful impact. Congratulations on your first placement. Excellent my friend! #7 ; ) Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 3/18/2016 10:26:00 PM Thank you, Connie. I don't write very often about romance, so I was surprised it did well, lol :)

Joanna Daniel Date: 3/17/2016 11:09:00 PM A passionate write. Congratulations on your win Laura:) Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 3/17/2016 11:41:00 PM Thank you, Jo :)

Joyce Johnson Date: 3/17/2016 11:03:00 PM congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 3/17/2016 11:40:00 PM Thank you, Joyce :)

Janice Canerdy Date: 3/17/2016 7:36:00 PM Congratulations on your win! Janice Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 3/17/2016 9:21:00 PM Thank you, Janice :)

Charlie Smith Date: 3/17/2016 5:06:00 PM Beautiful work and a much deserved win Laura, congratulations... Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 3/17/2016 5:26:00 PM Thank you, Charlie, for your kind words. I appreciate it:)

Vladislav Raven Date: 3/17/2016 4:46:00 PM Hi Laura, Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. The words of Love, passionate and romantic do sing from your pen. Both poems are excellent Laura. They are both deserving of a seven and into my faves....Vlad. Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 3/17/2016 5:26:00 PM Thank you so very much for your kind words, Vladislav! I appreciate it :)

Beautiful Scars Date: 3/17/2016 11:37:00 AM Oh Laura, I absolutely love this poem! Thank you for being a part of my contest and congrats on your top spot..:)-luloo *smiles* Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 3/17/2016 2:17:00 PM You're welcome :) well deserved :) Laura Leiser Date: 3/17/2016 2:11:00 PM Thank you so much, Laura Loo! I'm so excited and glad that you liked my poem this much, yay :)

Red Fiery Date: 3/10/2016 9:41:00 PM Such a romantic and passionate write...I was thrilled till the end...my dear poetess, you have nailed it ! 7/7 Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 3/10/2016 9:45:00 PM Thank you so much, Red Fiery. I'm glad you enjoyed it:)

Tim Smith Date: 3/7/2016 8:52:00 PM Very passionate Laura. I love the ending plea to stay and never let you go. a7++ Login to Reply Laura Leiser Date: 3/7/2016 8:57:00 PM Thanks, Tim. I don't write about passion very often, but you are an expert at it, so I am happy that you liked it :)