Captivating Love

Must you leave again?
Your strong, capable hands 
rest naturally upon my
curvaceous hips
masculine against feminine.

My world explodes with your
seductive, electrifying touch
as your inquiring blue eyes
penetrate mine so deeply.

Knowingly, you scan every 
inch of my body and face.
I melt, as your well formed
lips curve into a faint smile
as you explore with restraint.

My hands glide over your
tanned, muscled arms
feeling secure, as they 
wrap around my small frame.

I silently plead, stay with me
always, and never let me go. 
Must you leave again?




Written on 3/7/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Allison Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 8:23 PM
very romantic and passionate write Laura congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Leiser Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 10:27 PM
Thanks, Jan! I was surprised it did well, as I rarely write about romance!
Roper Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 6:49 PM
Congratulations on your win!!!!!!Hugs Eve
Leiser Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 10:26 PM
Thank you, Eve :)
Haight Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 8:58 AM
Beautifully written, Laura. Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra
Leiser Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 10:26 PM
Thank you very much, Sandra :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 3:40 AM
Laura, I really admire the way you begin and end your newest poem. I makes a more powerful impact. Congratulations on your first placement. Excellent my friend! #7 ; )
Leiser Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 10:26 PM
Thank you, Connie. I don't write very often about romance, so I was surprised it did well, lol :)
Daniel Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 11:09 PM
A passionate write. Congratulations on your win Laura:)
Leiser Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 11:41 PM
Thank you, Jo :)
Johnson Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 11:03 PM
congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Leiser Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 11:40 PM
Thank you, Joyce :)
Canerdy Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 7:36 PM
Congratulations on your win! Janice
Leiser Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 9:21 PM
Thank you, Janice :)
Smith Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 5:06 PM
Beautiful work and a much deserved win Laura, congratulations...
Leiser Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 5:26 PM
Thank you, Charlie, for your kind words. I appreciate it:)
Raven Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 4:46 PM
Hi Laura, Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. The words of Love, passionate and romantic do sing from your pen. Both poems are excellent Laura. They are both deserving of a seven and into my faves....Vlad.
Leiser Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 5:26 PM
Thank you so very much for your kind words, Vladislav! I appreciate it :)
Scars Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 11:37 AM
Oh Laura, I absolutely love this poem! Thank you for being a part of my contest and congrats on your top spot..:)-luloo *smiles*
Scars Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 2:17 PM
You're welcome :) well deserved :)
Leiser Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 2:11 PM
Thank you so much, Laura Loo! I'm so excited and glad that you liked my poem this much, yay :)
Fiery Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 9:41 PM
Such a romantic and passionate write...I was thrilled till the end...my dear poetess, you have nailed it ! 7/7
Leiser Avatar
March 10, 2016 at 9:45 PM
Thank you so much, Red Fiery. I'm glad you enjoyed it:)
Smith Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 8:52 PM
Very passionate Laura. I love the ending plea to stay and never let you go. a7++
Leiser Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 8:57 PM
Thanks, Tim. I don't write about passion very often, but you are an expert at it, so I am happy that you liked it :)
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