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Captivating Love

Must you leave again? Your strong, capable hands rest naturally upon my curvaceous hips masculine against feminine. My world explodes with your seductive, electrifying touch as your inquiring blue eyes penetrate mine so deeply. Knowingly, you scan every inch of my body and face. I melt, as your well formed lips curve into a faint smile as you explore with restraint. My hands glide over your tanned, muscled arms feeling secure, as they wrap around my small frame. I silently plead, stay with me always, and never let me go. Must you leave again? Written on 3/7/2016

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Jan Allison

Date: 3/18/2016 8:23:00 PM

very romantic and passionate write Laura congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/18/2016 10:27:00 PM

Thanks, Jan! I was surprised it did well, as I rarely write about romance!

Eve Roper

Date: 3/18/2016 6:49:00 PM

Congratulations on your win!!!!!!Hugs Eve

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/18/2016 10:26:00 PM

Thank you, Eve :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/18/2016 8:58:00 AM

Beautifully written, Laura. Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/18/2016 10:26:00 PM

Thank you very much, Sandra :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/18/2016 3:40:00 AM

Laura, I really admire the way you begin and end your newest poem. I makes a more powerful impact. Congratulations on your first placement. Excellent my friend! #7 ; )

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/18/2016 10:26:00 PM

Thank you, Connie. I don't write very often about romance, so I was surprised it did well, lol :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/17/2016 11:09:00 PM

A passionate write. Congratulations on your win Laura:)

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/17/2016 11:41:00 PM

Thank you, Jo :)

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/17/2016 11:03:00 PM

congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/17/2016 11:40:00 PM

Thank you, Joyce :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/17/2016 7:36:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! Janice

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/17/2016 9:21:00 PM

Thank you, Janice :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/17/2016 5:06:00 PM

Beautiful work and a much deserved win Laura, congratulations...

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/17/2016 5:26:00 PM

Thank you, Charlie, for your kind words. I appreciate it:)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/17/2016 4:46:00 PM

Hi Laura, Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. The words of Love, passionate and romantic do sing from your pen. Both poems are excellent Laura. They are both deserving of a seven and into my faves....Vlad.

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/17/2016 5:26:00 PM

Thank you so very much for your kind words, Vladislav! I appreciate it :)

Lu Loo

Date: 3/17/2016 11:37:00 AM

Oh Laura, I absolutely love this poem! Thank you for being a part of my contest and congrats on your top spot..:)-luloo *smiles*

Lu Loo
Date: 3/17/2016 2:17:00 PM

You're welcome :) well deserved :)

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/17/2016 2:11:00 PM

Thank you so much, Laura Loo! I'm so excited and glad that you liked my poem this much, yay :)

Red Fiery

Date: 3/10/2016 9:41:00 PM

Such a romantic and passionate write...I was thrilled till the end...my dear poetess, you have nailed it ! 7/7

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/10/2016 9:45:00 PM

Thank you so much, Red Fiery. I'm glad you enjoyed it:)

Tim Smith

Date: 3/7/2016 8:52:00 PM

Very passionate Laura. I love the ending plea to stay and never let you go. a7++

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/7/2016 8:57:00 PM

Thanks, Tim. I don't write about passion very often, but you are an expert at it, so I am happy that you liked it :)