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Laura Breidenthal

Canvas of Verdict

Bright
sunlit
angels call
forth in a dream
there is no escape from the light of God

He paints dreams on his canvas of verdict
never once flawed
or disturbed
into
Dark

Copyright © Laura Breidenthal | Year Posted 2011

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

December 30, 2011 at 5:36 PM

Dear Laura, First off Congratulations on YOUR 2nd Place Win in Brian's Contest He is a tough Judge, I hope YOU feel the Honor he has bestowed upon YOU I Bow to Honor YOUR POETIC Ability, with LOVE, ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...Harry

Andrea Dietrich

November 23, 2011 at 4:52 PM

This one is the best of the ones I read just now. Great contrasting stanzas between dark and bright!

July 11, 2011 at 11:53 AM

such a beautiful poem you wrote, congrats on your win.

July 8, 2011 at 3:03 PM

Congrats on your win with this creative work..Sara

July 6, 2011 at 9:18 PM

congratulations on your win.always Juanita.

July 6, 2011 at 12:22 PM

cheery congrats on your special win, laura :) huggs,

July 6, 2011 at 12:09 PM

Lovely Tetractys Laura, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest ;)

Barbara Gorelick

July 6, 2011 at 6:24 AM

Love the bright and dark concept in your poem. Congrats on your win. BG

July 6, 2011 at 5:27 AM

congratulations on your win love it

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 6, 2011 at 5:21 AM

Congrats Laura on second place super win with lovely poetry ..luv...

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 6, 2011 at 4:17 AM

Congratulations Laura for the win in Brian's "A Poem From Thee" contest. Love, Carol

July 6, 2011 at 3:56 AM

Incredible Tetractys, Laura. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie

July 2, 2011 at 6:16 PM

Wow, you have a busy mind today.I like

July 2, 2011 at 5:45 PM

Very serious topic here that is well presented..Enjoyed..Sara

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