Canvas of Verdict

Bright
sunlit
angels call
forth in a dream
there is no escape from the light of God

He paints dreams on his canvas of verdict
never once flawed
or disturbed
into
Dark

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 12/30/2011 5:36:00 PM
Dear Laura, First off Congratulations on YOUR 2nd Place Win in Brian's Contest He is a tough Judge, I hope YOU feel the Honor he has bestowed upon YOU I Bow to Honor YOUR POETIC Ability, with LOVE, ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...Harry
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Date: 11/23/2011 4:52:00 PM
This one is the best of the ones I read just now. Great contrasting stanzas between dark and bright!
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Date: 7/11/2011 11:53:00 AM
such a beautiful poem you wrote, congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/8/2011 3:03:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this creative work..Sara
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Date: 7/6/2011 9:18:00 PM
congratulations on your win.always Juanita.
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Date: 7/6/2011 12:22:00 PM
cheery congrats on your special win, laura :) huggs,
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Date: 7/6/2011 12:09:00 PM
Lovely Tetractys Laura, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest ;)
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Date: 7/6/2011 6:24:00 AM
Love the bright and dark concept in your poem. Congrats on your win. BG
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Date: 7/6/2011 5:27:00 AM
congratulations on your win love it
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Date: 7/6/2011 5:21:00 AM
Congrats Laura on second place super win with lovely poetry ..luv...
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Date: 7/6/2011 4:17:00 AM
Congratulations Laura for the win in Brian's "A Poem From Thee" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/6/2011 3:56:00 AM
Incredible Tetractys, Laura. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie
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Date: 7/2/2011 6:16:00 PM
Wow, you have a busy mind today.I like
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Date: 7/2/2011 5:45:00 PM
Very serious topic here that is well presented..Enjoyed..Sara
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