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"Creativity is a drug we cannot live without."  Cecil B. DeMille

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Can'T Walk Away - That Colorful Drug


Can't Walk Away


Oh, this obsession, and the need
     to reach that high once I've begun;
so hard to stop, can't walk away
     till this addiction's had its run.

Oh, please, you know I cannot stop,
     I tried so many times before.
I get that urge...it conquers me;
     not ready yet, so close that door.

You know I must descend inside
     my mind to where it's bright and clear;
to see those visions that excite 
     and rev my thoughts into high gear.

Be patient now, soon I'll be done.
     It's working, see...I'm breathing slow.
My soul is feasting on this bliss!
     All comes together, see the flow?

Thank heavens now, the need is filled...
     I've reached the summit, and I won...
My poem is done!... Now, out the door...
     Okay! Let's leave to have some fun!


Sandra M. Haight

~7th Place~
Contest: That Colorful Drug
Sponsor: Lewis Raynes
Judged: 06/02/2016

"Creativity is a drug we cannot live without." Cecil B. DeMille
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Salehi Avatar
June 4, 2016 at 3:41 PM
Cecile B DeMille will be proud of you Sandra. Beautiful poem and beautiful narration
Salehi Avatar
June 5, 2016 at 1:30 AM
You are the one Sandra...
Haight Avatar
June 4, 2016 at 4:38 PM
Thank you, Pashang! I am so pleased that you enjoyed my poem and the recitation! Much appreciated! Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 9:31 PM
Hey, congrats, lady. You are a wonder.
Haight Avatar
June 4, 2016 at 10:50 AM
Thank you, Andrea. Hugs, Sandra
Quigley Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 11:53 AM
Nice write! BTW, did you have kids? You have a sweet voice with just enough toughness behind it...
Haight Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 12:11 PM
Yes, Tom, three adult kids all ages 52 through 57, and five grandkids - ages 17 through 26! So pleased that you found my voice sweet! :)
Cheema Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 1:51 AM
Love the colours and words you painted with! In love with your drug! A 7, Sandra!
Haight Avatar
June 4, 2016 at 10:51 AM
Thank you so much, Balveen, for your supportive comment and nice rating! Hugs, Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 10:38 PM
Sandra, you and I were on the same wave length with this theme. I just went with shorter form!! VERY Nicely done.
Daniel Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 4:38 AM
Unique take on the theme:) loved it:)Can relate to it:) A fave and a#7:)
Haight Avatar
June 4, 2016 at 10:52 AM
Thank you so much, Jo, for your nice comment and rating! Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 11:32 AM
wonderful take on the theme Sandra good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 11:35 AM
Thank you, Jan. Hope people read it to the end! Hugs, Sandra
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