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Can'T Smile Without You

Tell me now please, are you my lost denture? Cause I can't smile without you, that's for sure. Your Best Pick Up Line Poetry Contest Sponsor: Judy Konos 30 April 2015

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David Meade

Date: 5/8/2015 5:24:00 PM

Smiles are overrated . . . now lips, well lips are wild and luscious -- at least in my imagination!! Well done Ms. Kim!! 7

Justin Bordner

Date: 5/6/2015 9:02:00 PM

Your innocence gave me my best smile...J.A.B.

Aiyah Torres

Date: 5/6/2015 10:55:00 AM

absolutely cheesy and cute *_* .. glad to visit your poem and paint a smile in my face today :)))

Paul Callus

Date: 5/4/2015 6:14:00 PM

Weee I enjoyed this one, Kim:) No dentures...no smile; no dentures...no chattering with cold! I've been told that Pinoys always go around with a lovely smile:) hugs // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/4/2015 8:24:00 AM

;0)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/2/2015 11:10:00 AM

Its perfect how you translated this, You bring me 1000 smiles!

James Peranteau

Date: 5/2/2015 8:10:00 AM

Humorous Couplet dear poet ! I'm wondering, being an integral influence of speach, did they; your dentures, respond to your query ? *smiles* Have a wonderful weekend Kim....much love, james

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/2/2015 1:15:00 AM

Now did you make this one up? I loved it! This is a poem one can sink their teeth into!!!

John Williams

Date: 5/1/2015 2:36:00 PM

Hahahahaha, you sure took a bite out of me with this one Kim......John

William J. Jr. Atfield

Date: 5/1/2015 12:17:00 PM

That is a mouth full !!!

William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 5/2/2015 12:03:00 PM

Good morning Kim : I do have my moments “ lol!... that's epic funny!, being put to pasture! ” my Dear. “ Didn't realize it bothered you sire... ”, it doesn’t Kim, I was just playing with you, I do know the other meaning of sire, which I know you mean in reference to addressing me . I guess I am in trouble my Dear, for I too have been president Bill. President, treasurer and secretary of my LTD company, president and treasurer of a society as well as being sole proprietor of two other companies, so I guess you must put me into the category of “ Bill...I guess I just am not fond of the name because of one president? ”. On that note Kim,, I will say goodbye . Bill .

William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 5/1/2015 2:00:00 PM

Good morning Kim : “ Hello, sire. ”, and a big hello to you too Madam. “ sire. ”, still gets to me my Dear, for I have been put out to pasture !!!, so to speak and just no longer see myself as capable of “ (1) beget – used esp. of male domestic animals - or capable of - (2) to bring into being : originate ” . LWM .

William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 5/1/2015 1:59:00 PM

“ How are you? ”, back to normal my Dear, ( whatever that means ??? ) now that my face does not look like one giant ugly balloon . “ You haven't posted anything lately. ” That is true Kim, it seems that my muses have neglected to stoke the fires of creation, and inspiration has been riding on the winds of Greek mythology with those nine goddesses presiding over song, poetry and the arts and sciences. “ Been busy? ”, and this is also true my Dear, as I think I have stated that in previous communiques . Well Kim, you do take good care until I, again, see some communication and maybe on some of, the much, that has been sent your way . Bill . ( B. J. “A” 2 )

Jack Ellison

Date: 5/1/2015 12:07:00 PM

Dear sweet Kimmie... this is a hoot!!! A winner??? Hope so! Judy asked me to enter but it's been too long since I needed one of those there pick-up lines! LOL Love you sweet Kimmie xxx

Emile Pinet

Date: 5/1/2015 10:36:00 AM

I'm not sure what to make of this, it's a funny pick up line and I like it, but I can't seem to understand why...weird. Emile. #7

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 5/1/2015 5:33:00 AM

Very unexpected and funny, Kim! : D Always, Laura

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 5/2/2015 9:23:00 PM

XD I just read this... hahaha XD Kim, you're so funny! And sweet <3 Your avatar is mysterious and gorgeous! ~Laura

Edwin Hofert

Date: 4/30/2015 11:08:00 PM

Wow. I just did not see that coming LOL Awesome! A 7 and a winner winner chicken dinner lol.

Edwin Hofert
Date: 4/30/2015 11:55:00 PM

LOL Where I'm at. (New England) There's a TV commercial that's using the Mammas don't your babies be cowboys song in it. Now it's just playing over and over in my head. lol. I had to try something to shake it lol.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2015 10:45:00 PM

So is that all we have to do is say the one liner? Oh, i hope so, it will be so easy to do this contest then. I LOVE this. I have never heard it before!!

Mama Bear

Date: 4/30/2015 5:49:00 PM

clever. My thoughts were elsewhere Hugs Edith

Tim Smith

Date: 4/30/2015 12:46:00 PM

lol....now that is funny

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/30/2015 12:29:00 PM

Forgot to put acute 7, now put. Loved always,bl

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/30/2015 12:24:00 PM

Denture also helps to make artificial smile, so keep up that it's needed. Ha ha ha..... with sweet smile. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Rochelle Harris

Date: 4/30/2015 11:44:00 AM

Laughed out loud at this one--- and I'm a firm believer that laughter is always the best medicine! Thank you for being one of my suppliers today (: ...walkin' on sunshine...Rochelle

Rochelle Harris

Date: 4/30/2015 11:29:00 AM

Laughed out loud at this one--- and I'm a firm believer that laughter is always the best medicine! Thank you for being one of my suppliers today (: ...walkin' on sunshine...Rochelle

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/30/2015 11:14:00 AM

Made me smile-- reminds me of the pick up lines dito sa Pinas, sobrang patawa, di ba?This is very witty.... Also, thank you for the fave of my latest post-- I actually edited it, dinagdagan ko-- hala, baka hindi na worthy ng fave, sorry, pinost ko kasi hindi pa ako tapos... also thank you so much for your insightful comments, it is very inspiring. God bless and enjoy the long weekend-- Pacquiao-Mayweather sa Linggo na! haha, sorry, had to put Pacquiao, exciting kasi!

Jan Allison

Date: 4/30/2015 9:28:00 AM

aww very clever Kim - made me laugh out loud - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 4/30/2015 10:06:00 AM

the title is a killer and the content brilliant! Hugs jan xx

Nandita Das

Date: 4/30/2015 9:12:00 AM

Very witty. Loved this...#7

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/30/2015 9:07:00 AM

- Yes, really cute Kim :) - I wish you good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)