Can'T I Write a Soup Mail:

To dear Nanette:
How can I express what I feel for you?
I love you.
Because you are you, 
When you are not with me, I’m blue.
Because you’re chic, 
Outside, the countryside is bleak.
Because you’re lovely,
I yearn for you embrace cuddly,
Because you are true,
We are one not two,
Because……


From the administrator:
Cut the crap and don’t waste our space.  Just go hug and kiss her.

To the administrator:
Spoilsport ;)
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George Avatar
February 14, 2022 at 1:47 AM
Reading this mail, she will come after you anywhere, anytime. Enjoyed the fun Victor
Kingston Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 4:29 PM
Dear Victor, Read to my husband and he gave me a romantic smile. " Jim, let's cuddle for a while" What a charming poem. Glad I came across it, Jimmy was too!
Ball Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 2:03 PM
Too cute. God Bless, JB
Merryman Avatar
May 26, 2021 at 7:33 PM
Ha!Ha! This was funny, Victor! Blessings, Kim M
Jayasankar Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 7:56 AM
Humorous and romantic Victor... God bless... ~ Ani
Dietrich Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 3:50 PM
What fun you had here, Victor. CUTE.
Theraven Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 8:20 AM
Victor, Loved this soup mail plea of yours. A hug and a kiss; the spoils of the finest war... -Richard
Daniel Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 7:01 AM
Humorous and clever, writ in your unique style, Victor:) enjoyed:)
Roper Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 7:18 PM
I like this, Victor, very witty. Hugs Eve
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 4:45 PM
Hello Victoe, so romantic. Enjoy your evening my freind.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 4:01 PM
Humorous!
Poet Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 3:50 PM
So romantic poem Victor, Real love will still recognize and pursue you because once you pronounce the magic word, all the feelings vibrate accordingly.
Edmonds  Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 3:18 PM
That’s lovely Victor, who wouldn’t love a romantic poem like that written especially for them,… Belle
Rose  Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 12:40 PM
lol, you tickle my heart this day, Victor, what a tender and fun poem. :)
Y. Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 9:58 AM
Hi Victor, You penned a clever, creative and romantic write. I enjoyed it very much, my friend. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Buehler Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 9:51 AM
How fun it is to read of romance this morning! A lovely verse, Victor. :)
Cunningham Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 9:21 AM
Go with the Administrator Victor, you won't regret it. Tom
Allison Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 9:14 AM
your poem made me smile Victor!:-) hugs Jan xx
Pandit Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 8:01 AM
Love so true will always hear you and follow you--especially hearing I love you. Daydreaming verse Victor!
Kendrick Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 7:52 AM
Ahh!! So some romance going on here. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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