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Can't Find my Rhythm

I can't seem to get into a rhythm Nothing but black and white in my prism When I danced, I fell down Tried to swim, almost drowned Then used our new sink to take a whiz in

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 1/5/2024 12:14:00 PM
A puzzler, Lobo, but fun!
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Date: 1/3/2024 8:42:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative/fun Limerick write. Looks like you found your rhyme. Put it under lock/key so you never lose it again. Have a blessed day writing away..........
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Date: 1/2/2024 8:40:00 PM
Funny man.
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Date: 1/2/2024 6:25:00 PM
That's what I call no pot to pee in
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Date: 1/2/2024 2:23:00 PM
Please tell me you took the dishes out first, GW…. Otherwise that’s so unrefined… ha ha. Thanks for the new year giggle. Terry
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Terry Flood
Date: 1/2/2024 3:49:00 PM
Erm… about that dinner invitation… could we perhaps eat out?
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/2/2024 3:47:00 PM
Foist, I foigot to take out the dishes, Terry. Oy, those dishes taste so much better with a little 'seasoning.' Hope you'll foigive me. ~ Brooklyn Dodger
Date: 1/2/2024 8:21:00 AM
Put the bottle down, my friend! LOL! Things are tipsy, I mean topsy-turvy…find those colors in the Aurora Borealis of life.
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Date: 1/1/2024 10:02:00 PM
Lol, it's mislaid not lost. Hope your new year is off to a flying start. Tom
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Date: 1/1/2024 9:25:00 PM
lol oh my! Good one!
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