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Candy's Dreamscapes - Story Poem

Once upon a time in faraway land, There lived little Candy with dreams so grand; She dreamt she was princess Cinderella, Or sometimes became small Thumbelina; One night, she danced with leprechauns and dwarves, Sometimes wearing sombreros, sometimes scarves; Her dreamy princess dress sparkled with gems, As she glided around crystal items; Once, when Candy was sleeping in the hall, Dreaming of princes dancing at her ball; In crept a wicked elf, he was so bad, He loathed her smile and wished to make her sad; He cast an evil spell on her nice dreams, From then on, her laughter turned to mad screams; She grew up day by day, afraid to sleep, Recalling the dream world she could not keep; Now, Candy was trapped in horrid nightmares, The elf felt sordid pleasure in her scares; Then one day, a beggar knocked on her door, Candy was too kind to simply ignore; She, though looking weary with sleepless eyes, Fed him, who was a wizard in disguise; The gentle wizard saw her deep sadness, And asked her the reason of her distress; She sighed and thought of all her lovely dreams, "My dreams are lost", she cried, her tears in streams; The wise wizard then saw the impish elf, That guy had stolen his wand from his shelf; Soon he was caught and the spell was broken, Her fairytale dreams brought joy unspoken; Candy jumped and danced, now that she could sleep, She thanked the wizard, now she need not weep; The elf had to serve the wizard for life, That was his punishment for causing strife; Little Candy got back her dreams and smile, She'd be a princess again, for a while. 02/03/17

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Date: 7/5/2023 2:34:00 AM
This is adorable. I love it! God bless you, friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 5/20/2017 11:56:00 PM
I love to read these kinds of poem/ stories. I have one called The Trouble With Trolls or Sparkling Pebbles :) 7 for sure.
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Date: 3/3/2017 10:41:00 PM
Amazing...once a upon a time fairytale. Enjoyed it thoroughly.
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Date: 2/12/2017 8:11:00 AM
This is a wonderful write and actually made my day more beautiful. Congratulations, Kai
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Date: 2/10/2017 7:14:00 PM
Jo, I love how you created this wonderful fairytale with the villain not getting away with his evilness. Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/12/2017 5:43:00 AM
Thank you, Eve:) all glory be to God:)
Date: 2/10/2017 6:02:00 PM
Lovely story Jo...Congrats on your win
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Date: 2/10/2017 4:34:00 PM
Congrats!!!...to the storyteller...that must take a lot of patience Jo...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 2/8/2017 1:29:00 PM
I love the drama and happy ending. A great story for children. You are so creative Jo! ; ) 7
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Date: 2/3/2017 6:38:00 PM
Wow, Jo. VERY well done. I see this one as a very creative story!!!
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Date: 2/3/2017 8:32:00 AM
"Dreamy" write, Jo. Great fun! Good luck although I doubt you'll need it:)
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Date: 2/3/2017 8:22:00 AM
What a fun and whimsical poetic story Jo. This was so much fun to read and so well written. I love happy endings. :)
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Date: 2/3/2017 5:15:00 AM
Very interesting and entertaining ... enjoyed reading ... GL ...
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Date: 2/3/2017 3:45:00 AM
- An entertaining poem, Jo - Very well written, you are skilled - Good luck in the contest ... a win poem ... if you ask me :) - A 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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