Barbara Gorelick Poet Limerick

Candy Lips

 




She wore red candy lips on Halloween
They didn't know she was a vampire queen
Her kiss was so sweet
Swept him off his feet
Sadly,no trace of him has ever been seen





Barbara Gorelick 7/21/12

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Carol Sunshine Brown July 27, 2012 at 11:10 AM Thank you for your support of my contest and congratulations on your well deserved win Barbara. Love, Carol

Rockman Pritts July 25, 2012 at 9:41 PM Nicely done resulting in a smile. Congrats on your win. :-)

Sara Kendrick July 25, 2012 at 5:06 PM LOL..Enjoyed..((())Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Erich Goller July 25, 2012 at 2:58 PM Congratulation on your win.,a fun Limerick. God bless you. Hugs!Erich

David Williams July 25, 2012 at 3:54 AM Babara super congrats on your win, excellent write...very good..David

Joy Wellington July 24, 2012 at 7:35 PM Congrats Barbara...good to be among great winners like you. One love. Joy Wells

Debbie Guzzi July 24, 2012 at 5:08 PM LOL [I used to love chewing those lips! & the wax bottles of sweet colored syrup] Congrad's on your fine write winning. Light & Love

Joseph May July 24, 2012 at 4:22 PM congrats on your win Barbara

Kathryn Collins July 24, 2012 at 7:04 AM Dear Barbara - Yikes! Guess he couldn't kiss and tell. Great poem. love, Kathy

Anne-Lise Andresen July 22, 2012 at 12:28 PM Sticky kiss ????.......well done - Luck to you in contest Barbara! - oxox love Anne-Lise

Wilma Neels July 22, 2012 at 12:00 PM Your lips with a twist Barbara ;) love it!