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Candy Lips

She wore red candy lips on Halloween They didn't know she was a vampire queen Her kiss was so sweet Swept him off his feet Sadly,no trace of him has ever been seen Barbara Gorelick 7/21/12

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/27/2012 11:10:00 AM

Thank you for your support of my contest and congratulations on your well deserved win Barbara. Love, Carol

Rockman Pritts

Date: 7/25/2012 9:41:00 PM

Nicely done resulting in a smile. Congrats on your win. :-)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/25/2012 5:06:00 PM

LOL..Enjoyed..((())Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Erich Goller

Date: 7/25/2012 2:58:00 PM

Congratulation on your win.,a fun Limerick. God bless you. Hugs!Erich

David Williams

Date: 7/25/2012 3:54:00 AM

Babara super congrats on your win, excellent write...very good..David

Joy Wellington

Date: 7/24/2012 7:35:00 PM

Congrats Barbara...good to be among great winners like you. One love. Joy Wells

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/24/2012 5:08:00 PM

LOL [I used to love chewing those lips! & the wax bottles of sweet colored syrup] Congrad's on your fine write winning. Light & Love

Joseph May

Date: 7/24/2012 4:22:00 PM

congrats on your win Barbara

Kathryn Collins

Date: 7/24/2012 7:04:00 AM

Dear Barbara - Yikes! Guess he couldn't kiss and tell. Great poem. love, Kathy

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/22/2012 12:28:00 PM

Sticky kiss ????.......well done - Luck to you in contest Barbara! - oxox love Anne-Lise

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/22/2012 12:00:00 PM

Your lips with a twist Barbara ;) love it!