Candy Cotton Dreams

Daddy picked his cotton Six scorched days a week Sundays were sunny gleeful Cotton candy I held in hand He took me to the county fair Pink and pretty as could be Balloons hid my child's tears for the days he toiled away My daddy loved to toss me high up in the air he'd yell, I love you My pink beautiful butterfly Ferris wheels and chocolate pies Sundays truly I the pink happy butterfly One day the balloons all popped Daddy grasping heart Tumbled to the ground there are no more Candy cotton dreams only Somber clown tears
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Debole Avatar
June 22, 2022 at 5:53 PM
You are becoming one of my favorite poets.
Trifiatis Avatar
November 3, 2018 at 1:08 PM
How sad and unhappy a child can be when his/her father dies cannot be felt by those who have not been through it ! It is an experience that never leaves the person in question no matter how old gets. I know it because I have lived it! Welcome my friend. Hope you stay with us and share your poetry! God bless you!
Mcconnell Avatar
November 3, 2018 at 3:59 AM
Cherished memories indeed so well penned Aurore, Well done, blessings, Gordon
Wanter Avatar
September 26, 2018 at 9:44 AM
I love this poem - the way you made the fair experience an analogy of your life with your father.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 1:20 PM
Hello Aurore, you must remember the happy times spent with your father. Have a nice day my friend.
Solomon Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 8:16 PM
A lovely but sad write! Well done
Michael Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 9:29 AM
After all is said and done ~ a beautiful memory remains somewhere inside of you...Nicely expressed candy cotton girl....
Callus Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 5:06 PM
Beautiful...and yet so sad, Aurore! Fortunately, amongst your memories, you can find ones that bring a smile and make your eyes shine. Regards // paul
Smith Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 3:09 PM
The cycle of life
White Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 11:16 PM
Beautiful poem, Aurore, and so sad :(
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