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Candy

Cloud layers thin-spun from 
crystallized sugar and
colored tints of rainbow-
carnivals hawk the sweet
children love to eat in
crepey layers pressed to
crunchy end, candy treat.

Copyright, August 22, 2016
Faye Lanham Gibson

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Paul Callus Date: 8/26/2016 12:53:00 PM Coloured candy is lovely to look at, Faye, and most children love it! Your poem is quite tempting, too! Congratulations on your podium finish. Regards // paul Login to Reply

Teddy Kimathi Date: 8/26/2016 8:42:00 AM Hi Faye. Congrats for your placement, with this fine piece!! ;-) Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/26/2016 4:00:00 AM - Congratulations on your winning poems, Faye :) - hugs and :) Login to Reply

Kai Michael Neumann Date: 8/26/2016 3:12:00 AM Crepey layers pressed to crunchy end treats. That is good stuff. Congratulations. Kai Login to Reply

Viv Wigley Date: 8/26/2016 12:31:00 AM Yum! Well done, Faye! Viv x Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/25/2016 9:37:00 PM Congratulations Faye with this delicious delightful Pleiades! 7 ; ) Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 8/25/2016 8:18:00 PM Faye, congrats on your 3rd place win with this creatively delicious write! Blessings! Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 8/25/2016 5:00:00 PM Dropping back with my congrats Faye - i see we are next to eachother on the list - such sweet treats:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 8/23/2016 5:24:00 AM I'm not a candy floss fan but this is lovely and descriptive Faye - I've written mine about chocolate but am yet to post it :-)Good luck in the contest hugs Jan xx Login to Reply