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Candles

Eyes that gleam My Birthday Boy Blows out three So full of joy My cake aflame My little boy Helps grandma blow Both full of joy

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Brian Strand

Date: 2/7/2010 11:21:00 PM

Thank you for your welcome blog comments today BG.Rgds Brian

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 2/1/2010 10:54:00 AM

Such a happy read, full of life and wonderful imagery. lovely and happy birthday! Michael

Kim Hilliker

Date: 1/30/2010 11:45:00 PM

How cute! Thanks for sharing.

Margaret Foster

Date: 1/30/2010 11:34:00 PM

The gift of children is a blessing. The joy they find in simple things rubs of on us older folk... Hope you both had/have happy birthdays.....Margaret

Samir Georges

Date: 1/30/2010 11:06:00 PM

I trouble myself by writing about theories and philosophical inquiries when the true simplicity of life escapes my ensnaring words. Yet here they are, wrapped in your marvelous web of emotion. And I am in another class? I am but an amateur taking in all these wondrous sites around!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/30/2010 8:22:00 PM

Happy birthday to your grandson, Barbara. This is a delight to read. Love, Carolyn

Constance La France

Date: 1/30/2010 7:35:00 PM

A very loving family scene you paint with words.