Candle

Candle

I walked on soft pine needles
When the cool breeze touched my face.
The last single leaves were falling, twirling,
In the air all around me.
Even the shadows danced in the street.
I took a breath of patience, given to me.
Tall white birch trees towered above.
Slender in the sun so bright.
I think of the last candle I lit.
Did I put it out or did it just fade?
Or was it both of us burning bright
Until it went out in the dark of the night?

Heidi Sands
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Grasso Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 8:38 AM
Lovely, Heidi. ...Fran
Sands Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 8:40 AM
Thank you Fran :)
Chircop Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 3:44 PM
Awesome write sweet lady.
Sands Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 3:57 PM
Thank you Charmaine :)
Turner Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 3:41 PM
I know a thing or two about fading. I can't see someone as bright as you fading:) Love the poem, Heidi.
Sands Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 3:43 PM
Daniel, what a special thing to say. Thank you :)
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