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Candelit Voices

"Clean shaven memories remain stuck in silence waiting to scream" Voices sing out in adulation inflections bending an ear float me off to be lit eye interior arranged to be blown away with heavenly wings Candlelit flickers imagine soft breeze kisses await crisscrossed oceans and moonbeams aired along whispered dreams folded up neatly cascading my way

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Carol Eastman

Date: 5/25/2017 12:34:00 PM

Your wording and structure have become more intricate over time... Practice and thought definitely do make perfect.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/24/2017 6:54:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, Tim. It sweeps the reader away!!

Carol B.

Date: 5/23/2017 1:36:00 PM

Are you a musician by any chance? You write such beautiful romantic pieces. I could picture you singing and playing a guitar. You're a very romantic soul!!

Lin Lane

Date: 5/23/2017 8:30:00 AM

Lovin' it all, Tim...especially the last verse

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/23/2017 6:20:00 AM

Good Morning Tim. Excuse me Good Morning Poet Tim. This is more than fine poetry. Everything with your composition and construction is well throughout. I have one problem however. I wish I had created this. This is original and so beautiful including the title. Well done completely and entirely. Have a wonderful morning.

Darren White

Date: 5/23/2017 3:37:00 AM

I wish them your way my friend, I honestly do.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/22/2017 7:08:00 PM

Not hard to tell you are a romantic! Beautiful!

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 5/22/2017 4:55:00 PM

How is it every time I look at your avatar you look a day older lol Great job my friend

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/22/2017 4:22:00 PM

Now this is very romantic and amazingly beautiful.

Tim Smith
Date: 5/22/2017 4:37:00 PM

Thanks Charma...listening to some beautiful music.

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 5/22/2017 4:21:00 PM

Your lyrics lilt like perfume.

Tim Smith
Date: 5/22/2017 4:36:00 PM

Thanks so much Dale

Chris Green

Date: 5/22/2017 4:14:00 PM

There is a feeling of loneliness early on in this poem but it seems good things come to those who wait. Nicely done my friend.

Tim Smith
Date: 5/22/2017 4:36:00 PM

Just hope we don't have to wait too long.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/22/2017 4:03:00 PM

I am in awe of your ability to write romantic poetry and you are such a versatile poet on so many levels Tim:-) another gem flows from your pen:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith
Date: 5/22/2017 4:34:00 PM

Thanks Jan, I am humbled by your words.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/22/2017 3:54:00 PM

Beautifully written Tim :)

Tim Smith
Date: 5/22/2017 4:33:00 PM

Thanks so much Heidi