Canadian Geese

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                                        Canadian Geese
                                        Delightful sound
                          Husband's glasses squeeze nose
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Knop Avatar
January 30, 2011 at 6:58 AM
Great Haiku, Sara, so cute! Enjoyed the read and thank you for your kind comments always!...Gert
Kysely Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 10:11 AM
So cute!!! Love it!!! Very creative !!! XOXO Christine
Austin Avatar
January 29, 2011 at 8:02 AM
This is super. Hope your husband didn't read thisw. Love, Dave
Pettit Avatar
January 28, 2011 at 2:47 PM
We have too many of them where I am. They cross the streets in bunches and hold up the traffic. Your haiku displays good descriptiveness about those so-called "rats with wings".
Melody Lightning Ink Avatar
January 28, 2011 at 11:07 AM
i think it's humorous, nice haiku.Are you a Canadian?
Neels Avatar
January 28, 2011 at 2:58 AM
hehe, this had me smiling Sara ;)
Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 9:01 PM
hahaha. He sounds like a goose??
Mehta Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 6:46 PM
Nice image you have sketched of the canadian geese, sara
Sweetheart Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 5:03 PM
Super sweet write Sara... luv your last line my friend.. could hear the sound the geese make with your words my friend.. good luck if for the contest...luv..
Kendrick Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 3:35 PM
I thought that I heard some geese and was wondering how when its too late for them to be going south and too early for the northern trip..Got to looking around and it was my husband breathing with his glasses too far down on his nose..Sara
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