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Canada Goose

After the third day She stopped saying "you must go" And his kept saying "NO" Her wing was broke- couldnt fly Looking up ,saying goodbye Migrating flock ,noisy and way up high Overwintering has but one outcome She tries to think of them, thought of him Who follows her on scaly webbed feet Slipping on the ice, painful wing Frozen lake,sheet of ice and bleaky mist He tries to shield her wing From gusty wind, it little helps The snow fox came to steal the egg She slapped and missed Broken wing broken egg Still he waits for the larger meal Just out of reach but sure to come Two dead geese for the price of one Once last plea for him to go One of us must live But he says no As dead she lies His hungered honk Defies an invisible foe Nowhere to go, it all looks like snow Too old to live, too cold to care Slowly walks toward the fox

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Date: 1/25/2018 1:09:00 PM
The harshness of winter and it's affect on creatures is palpable in this sad but beautifully written poem Janine. Lovely! : )
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 1/25/2018 10:17:00 PM
Thank you my Connie
Date: 10/29/2017 8:50:00 PM
Oh Jannie, this poem is so sad. have a nice evening my friend.
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 1/25/2018 10:17:00 PM
Thank you "Darling" de Beaulieu.
Date: 9/26/2017 12:42:00 AM
Hi Andrea, so nice to have you on my show. Thanks
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Date: 9/25/2017 7:50:00 AM
Wonderful but so sad. Life is brutal at times and this piece illustrates it so well. Well done x
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Jannie Breedt
Date: 9/26/2017 12:44:00 AM
Hi Tvhia (the lady with the most wonderful name) Down here the brutallity is rife. Most folk wont look, as if that makes it go away
Date: 9/21/2017 7:48:00 PM
oh my goodness. What a tragedy you wove with your words, Jannie. The cruelty of nature very well portrayed in this verse.
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Date: 9/21/2017 2:14:00 PM
I just knew. Besides that all they have i Canada right? Geese and snow what? He he. So glad it hit home Grizzly bear hug
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/21/2017 8:35:00 PM
OH I may have to disagree on that point. We have a large country filled with flora and fauna.....oh wait a minute you were just trying to get a rise and I fell for it. Hugs rom the Sasquatch.
Date: 9/21/2017 11:53:00 AM
This is so beautiful I was crying while reading it to myself. Jannie you have such a delicate touch with such thoughts. Thank you. It goes into my treasure box. They are flocking here down on the bay larger and larger numbers. In the late afternoon they rise off the water and fly in great Bees to the grain fields above us to glean the last grains fattening for the long flight south. How did you know I loved the geese with a passion.
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