Can You Hear Me?

I never talk to you as much as I should
Just to say thank you for all of your gifts
I take for granted all that you’ve given to me
Sometimes blaming you for all I have missed
And when you come to me I shy away
Feigning I can’t see you or hear you
But no matter where I look you’re around me
In every vivid color and shape of movement
You voice beckoning in all the worldly sounds
I even try to hide myself away from you
Still you find me wherever I go without effort
Cruel and hard or ignorant and fleeting
I’ve been both and you lovingly embrace me
Cursing you at the losses washed upon me
Your hand generously gives without prejudice
Gluttonously taking much more than my fill
When I look back you’ve again filled my cup
All the mistakes I have made and will make
Many of them knowingly and willingly
Still you offer all of your forgiveness
If only I will ask as a son should his father
I’ve broken so many of your rules a multitude of times
Deceiving myself believing you wouldn’t notice
Still you offer me everything you have
When I lay in the dark at night and examine
I hope and fear you and I doubt and pray
I hope you can hear me through all the other voices
Although I fear you don’t listen to me anymore
I force myself to doubt your existence
Knowing the truth unwilling to admit to it
I pray…Dear God…Can you hear me?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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Mason Avatar
January 17, 2009 at 3:34 PM
When we smile at the beggar and the coin we give no longer feels heavy, or the food donated is no longer clogging our own shelf we can know we were heard ... beautiful write here Charles and a well-deserved one to be a feature of the week here at the Soup. Congratulations!
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January 17, 2009 at 8:42 AM
You took the words out of my mouth. So many mistakes I make, yet I still receive that unconditional love though I am un-deserving. Congrats on this beautiful write being featured. :) Cheers, Alana
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January 15, 2009 at 5:34 PM
Charles Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :0)
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January 14, 2009 at 3:26 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week...Raul
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January 13, 2009 at 8:22 PM
I think most of us can relate to this, Charlie. I have concluded that God is unconditional love. Sensational writing!!! Love, lainie
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January 13, 2009 at 4:57 AM
Congratulations Charlie on "Can You Hear Me?" being featured. Hope all is well, Your family is in my prayers. God Bless. Vince
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January 12, 2009 at 5:54 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Charlie. Love, Carol
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January 11, 2009 at 11:45 PM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Charles.Rgds Brian
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January 11, 2009 at 8:17 PM
This piece certainly resonates with me, Charles. You're not alone in the feeling that we take and take and slip and fall... and never give enough of ourselves back to Him. But we always feel gratitude for His unconditional love. Thank you for sharing this. Donna G.
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January 11, 2009 at 2:03 PM
A poem we can all relate to...our talk with our God. Well derserving poem to be among the featured poems this week! ~ Carrie
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January 11, 2009 at 1:31 PM
Full of depth and emotion. A beautiful poem many of us can easily relate to. Congratulations Charles on your amazing featured write. Love, Shar
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January 11, 2009 at 12:28 PM
There is a lot of depth in this poem. Yes, God does hear out pleas. Congratulations on being featured this week. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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