Can Still Hear Mom Yelling - Hlm

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Farmhouse Slow Cooker Beef Stew - The Seasoned Mom

winter comes quickly one day all is pristine white - cars snow covered ships This is when mother made her robust stew vegetables and beef in the pot she threw the aroma filled the house all were sniffing like a mouse meat so tender we barely had to chew we loved the gravy would dip bread to soak it up- till there was none left ____________________ January 20, 2022 Poetry/Haiku/Limerick/Monoku/Can Still Hear Mom Yelling - HLM Copyright Protected, ID 01-1431-186-20 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Charlie Hai-Lim-Ku sponsor, Charles Messina, Judged 03/11/2022 Second Place

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Charles Messina

Date: 3/16/2022 8:09:00 PM

Constance, so sorry it took so long to comment on this delightful write. Awesome job combining these forms. I love the poem and OMG you brought back great memories of the stew my mom used to make, dipping the bread was the best! My belated Congrats on your win in my contest. Hugs Charlie

Constance La France
Date: 3/17/2022 7:54:00 AM

Charlie, thank you so much for the inspiration and contest and my placement, compliment and congrats, oh yes dipping the bread was the absolutely the best ~Constance

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/14/2022 3:50:00 AM

Back with congrats. I have read your winning entry and was delighted to see it on the winners' list. Congratulations on your place of honor. Way to go. Sara

Constance La France
Date: 3/14/2022 3:07:00 PM

Sara, thanks so much for the congratulations and the compliment ~Constance

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/11/2022 12:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful/fun write. Great memories are the best. Is it time to eat??? Have a blessed day/weekend..............

Constance La France
Date: 3/11/2022 2:02:00 PM

Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment ~Constance

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/11/2022 5:07:00 AM

Spicy gravy. Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Constance La France
Date: 3/11/2022 2:03:00 PM

Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations ~Constance

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/21/2022 5:16:00 AM

You mom was a wise woman. She got her children to eat some food items that they probably would not have eaten separately but when combined they gobbled down. I really like this one. I enjoyed reading it. It reminds me of my soup that I prepare about twice a month, but my husband still fusses. I love it but for some reason he sees it as food for someone who is sick. LOL..Your visit to my page was revivifying. Sara

Constance La France
Date: 1/21/2022 2:37:00 PM

Sara, thanks for the comment, my Mom and Grandma made the best stews. I am so happy you like my poem ~