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Can I sleep with you


Incurable insomnia had perturbed my eyes 
Negligence had destroyed your hopes too 
You were drenched by a heavy shower of sadness. 
Till My bare lustrous skin approached your hours 
Your hands gradually caressing my dynamic curves 
 Long black curls had fallen on your shoulders 
The ecstacy of my passion reached its final hours 
Emotions ran down to my neck 
You were drugged by a blissful kiss 
Isolation was broken with this union . 
Endless nights  spent in your arms 
 Loneliness was ravaged by the kingdom of happiness 
I slept in your deep tranquil eyes . 
Till the moonlight disappeared in the lonely sky . 
This rapturous dream was beautiful and true 
Can I really sleep with you ?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/4/2016 11:17:00 PM
Your poem is deliciously romantic. I confess that I embraced every line. I especially love the imagery "I slept in your deep tranquil eyes." Congrats on an exceptionally well composed write. hugs x x x
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Date: 3/15/2016 9:17:00 AM
Hi Red. Congrats on your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 3/14/2016 11:28:00 AM
Hi Red, Congratulations on your win in the contest. Such sensual dreams of delight. I enjoyed the read....Vlad.
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Date: 3/14/2016 9:03:00 PM
thank you !
Date: 3/14/2016 12:25:00 AM
Very, ah, nice and, ah. Oh boy. I think I'm blushing... Just kidding around. Super sexy. I really enjoyed it. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/14/2016 9:04:00 PM
I am blushing now ...:)
Date: 3/13/2016 11:30:00 AM
Hi Red, Wow, great--such evocative imagery! Congratulations on your win! Cheers, Brian
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Date: 3/14/2016 9:04:00 PM
thank you so much Brian...I love your visits...love Red
Date: 3/13/2016 11:15:00 AM
Very hot!!! Congrats on your win
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Date: 3/14/2016 9:05:00 PM
Thanx Brian..:)
Date: 3/13/2016 10:34:00 AM
WOW, I am steamed with insomnia. LOL, I'm shocked to see you join one of my contest. :) Red Fiery, you truly know how to capture your readers attention... Love LINDA
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Date: 3/13/2016 10:44:00 AM
I am flabbergasted now.... Hurray...!!! Love u Linda
Date: 3/13/2016 10:34:00 AM
PS Red Fiery, Congratulations on your win. Thank you so much for supporting my contest. Stop by my blog "Names on Poetry Soup" if you like. It would be nice to hear from you and all those who I honored with a placement. XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/3/2016 4:43:00 AM
Lovely, sensual and tempting, Smriti. You express the deep feelings which interrupt the slumber of a lonely desirous person. Hope your dream turned into reality. ~ // paul
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Date: 9/19/2013 9:01:00 PM
i am touched by this.
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Date: 8/18/2013 8:20:00 AM
Based on the comments it appears your poem caused a stir of emotions. Well done.
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Date: 8/10/2011 7:39:00 AM
Very lovely poem! Thanks for sharing it with us. Regards, Aejaz
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Date: 7/22/2011 11:23:00 AM
this is really great work......i just went dreaming the feel you depicted....thoroughly felt it....
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Date: 7/9/2011 8:12:00 PM
emotionally erotic Smirti with romantic overtones .. great question at the end... dreams come true luv..
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Date: 7/9/2011 7:08:00 PM
drugged by a blissful kiss! Ahh! I relate soo well! hahaha! I simply enjoyed your poem while I had my first sip this morn! More please!
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Date: 7/9/2011 4:47:00 PM
You should know the answer to this last question, although I understand it is rhetorical. The forth line stands out as a lively erotic play on perfection. Love is truly the best drug.
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Date: 7/9/2011 4:47:00 PM
Very nice....enjoyed.
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