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Can I Have Blue Sprinkle

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I babysit my grandson during the weekends and every moring he crawls on my bed and ask for sprinkle dounut at 6:30 when he wakes up. A face I cannot refuse.

 

A happy small boy, only four, Pure joy, is knocking at the door. He slowly climbs up on the bed As his daddy pretends to snore. He snuggles close and lays his head With an angelic smile that spread From ear to ear, wanting to play. I love you, his proud daddy said. In Micky Mouse P.J.s, Jay, Jumps up and down wanting his way, Then down on the bed on his butt Lands with a mischievous smile. Yea! Can I get blue sprinkles doughnut, And go to the park with Peanut? Play on the slide in the playground, And drive go-karts, and go putt, putt. Yelping delight, Peanut the hound A bouncing step, off onward bound; Sticky blue frosting covered face, Round, round on the merry-go-round. 5/30/2022 Rubaiyat Contest' Sponsored By Sotto Poet aaba-bbcb-ccdc-dded-eefe

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Date: 6/14/2022 10:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a "Fun/Creative" write. Blue Frosting and Blue Sprinkle are the best to a four year old. Sounds like you are having a ton of fun. Have a great/blessed day writing away.......................
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Date: 6/13/2022 8:24:00 PM
A great poem, indeed! Congratulations!
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Date: 6/13/2022 5:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest Eve, you did a wonderful job in this poem. Best regards
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Date: 6/2/2022 1:27:00 PM
Such a lovely tale so well told Eve, with beautiful imagery too. Blessings, Gordon
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Date: 5/31/2022 4:19:00 PM
Really beautiful imagery, and the joy of a family, Eve. Good luck Panagiota
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Date: 5/31/2022 4:17:00 PM
Much easier when they want a treat and to have fun! Love it!
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Date: 5/31/2022 11:31:00 AM
Nice to know some people still enjoy life in 2022! Aloha!
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Date: 5/31/2022 1:28:00 AM
A lively description of your home. Good to see Peanuts in good health.
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