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I babysit my grandson during the weekends and every moring he crawls on my bed and ask for sprinkle dounut at 6:30 when he wakes up. A face I cannot refuse.

 

Can I Have Blue Sprinkle

A happy small boy, only four,
Pure joy, is knocking at the door. 
He slowly climbs up on the bed 
As his daddy pretends to snore. 

He snuggles close and lays his head 
With an angelic smile that spread 
From ear to ear, wanting to play.
I love you, his proud daddy said. 

In Micky Mouse P.J.s, Jay, 
Jumps up and down wanting his way,
Then down on the bed on his butt 
Lands with a mischievous smile. Yea! 

Can I get blue sprinkles  doughnut,
And go to the park with Peanut?
Play on the slide in the playground,
And drive go-karts, and go putt, putt. 

Yelping delight, Peanut the hound 
A bouncing step, off onward bound; 
Sticky blue frosting covered face,
Round, round on the merry-go-round.

5/30/2022


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Goldsmith Avatar
June 14, 2022 at 10:02 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a "Fun/Creative" write. Blue Frosting and Blue Sprinkle are the best to a four year old. Sounds like you are having a ton of fun. Have a great/blessed day writing away.......................
Alex Avatar
June 13, 2022 at 8:24 PM
A great poem, indeed! Congratulations!
Poet Avatar
June 13, 2022 at 5:13 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest Eve, you did a wonderful job in this poem. Best regards
Mcconnell Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 1:27 PM
Such a lovely tale so well told Eve, with beautiful imagery too. Blessings, Gordon
Romios Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 4:19 PM
Really beautiful imagery, and the joy of a family, Eve. Good luck Panagiota
Rodrigues Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 4:17 PM
Much easier when they want a treat and to have fun! Love it!
Leffanta Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 11:31 AM
Nice to know some people still enjoy life in 2022! Aloha!
Buhagiar Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 1:28 AM
A lively description of your home. Good to see Peanuts in good health.
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