Can I Be the One

I have dreams and high hopes for the coming new year.
Many aspirations that I must achieve with true ease. 
When this year ends and all the madness does cease
I shall bring forth good will without dread nor fear. 
O, I shall fall to my knees and love without displease. 

Can I be the one to make a difference?
May I take away all life’s sufferance. 

My house has needed much improved alteration.
I should paint rooms here and there without complaint. 
I know I would enjoy my living space if acquaint 
with my new furnishings of my own creative creation. 
I shall show myself I can be handy without restraint. 

Can I be the one to transform the earth?
May I show myself my treasured worth. 

I pray I can take time just for me to write poetry
more often so I can feel the comfort I used to feel.
For writing has always been the only way I heal,
I can only save myself from disdain and misery.
O, I must show my mind my gifts can be ideal. 

Can I be the one to express my soul?
May I try my best to fill my heart whole. 

I shall begin to bestow kindness more unto family
so that they can understand how I feel so abate. 
May I love without hate and genuine joy create,
showing how much I appreciate unconditionally. 
O, in multitude of faith and joy may I saturate.

Can I be the one who shows I can be me?
May I show God just how beautiful I can be.




Soon It Will Be 2019
December 22, 2018
Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 1/12/2019 4:34:00 PM
Congrats on your podium finish, Lu Loo. Well penned. Lovely form.
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Date: 1/7/2019 1:17:00 AM
Lu you always write beautifully. This poem had it all, rhyme, rhythm, a chorus and lyrical thoughts.
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Date: 12/22/2018 6:18:00 PM
Another exquisitely-enjoyable read, Lu Loo, and you have spun hope and doubt together like a fine tapestry, and covered me with its fulfillment ... I am never disappointed when I click on your work, and there are only a select few here that I can say that about. Excellent - I am fav-ing. Best wishes for a Merry Christmas to you and yours! :-) <3
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Date: 12/23/2018 10:33:00 AM
you are so sweet as always dear Gregory. best wishes for you also!!! :)-luloo
Date: 12/22/2018 4:27:00 PM
Yes, I know you can - one step at a time.
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Date: 12/23/2018 10:33:00 AM
awww thank you sweet Sunlite, you are so sweet always )-luloo
Date: 12/22/2018 11:52:00 AM
I've noticed through out the year your lovely style of writing...fluent and meaning full...Merry Christmas to you and yours...
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Date: 12/23/2018 10:32:00 AM
thank you very much Arturo, you too! :)-luloo
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