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Campfires and Thunderstorms

Campfires and Thunderstorms

Campfires and thunderstorms:
Heads poke out from under cover
To see clouds bursting
That swell the river.

Ears prick to hear tree-snapping sounds
As lightning cracks and thunder booms.
Torrential rains pour down to soak the ground;
The firewood gets wet, and the tent becomes waterlogged.

Dismal and miserable, the campers reflect;
Then, their eyes fix upon the canoe tucked away,
Still overturned and safely protected.
Sighs of relief are exhaled as they sit and wait.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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July 23, 2023 at 8:35 AM
I've been reading your canoeing/camping series and I have thoroughly enjoyed them. The Portage and Rapids Ahead were great. Have not done much canoeing but have camped throughout the southwest U.S. Again, I really enjoyed your travelogue. John
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