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CAMPFIRE  I thirst to taste your solid wood stare I see you and no one else  Nestling under the stars Hungry for each others ears Chasing every comet across the sky Fierce when it comes to standing tall Desires releas screams from the mundane night Running naked throughout the world Firewood burning the depth of our soul Dancing in a path we put mortals to shame   A swarm of gray shade arousing the night Secret moans before, morning dew hit sunrise Prowling in circles Feeling each others instinctive curiosity Surrender to the ashes of our hide   Passion lost within a dream-catchers web. A pack of thieves we long to be Weaving into an echoless growl No one dares to separate the pack we create  A stare of solid wood I hunger to taste.  Night after night, IN THE MOOD ~always

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/2/2016 1:09:00 AM
I quite enjoy the imagery you've painted in this. Well enjoyed and worth reading many times more, a slow sipped wine. well done!
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Date: 3/31/2016 5:37:00 PM
It is amazing. Well depicted.
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Date: 2/7/2016 11:14:00 AM
This remarkable poem puts the reader there--by that campfire--"chasing every comet across the sky." Magnificent imagery and flow with a compelling message. Awesome.
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Date: 2/6/2016 12:29:00 PM
I love campfires- the relaxation of solitude after sunset. Peace. I think this is my favorite so far :)
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Date: 2/4/2016 11:00:00 PM
love ya forever **SKAT**
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Date: 10/4/2015 12:44:00 AM
Wonderful write. :~)
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Date: 7/26/2015 4:17:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Linda! This is just beautiful!
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Date: 7/5/2015 9:38:00 PM
Beautiful expressions of passion in this poem... Congrats on your win, as well, Linda!
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Date: 7/3/2015 1:45:00 PM
PD, now that Joe killed my dream of seeing Graceland today, I may find time to work on that haiku for ya!! Finally got another one finished and hope I have time to post THAT one!! Nothing much else to do around here. (long story) Luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/30/2015 6:38:00 PM
Thank you so much... Shadow... I do try :)
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Date: 6/28/2015 8:19:00 PM
Fascinating write a7 . congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/28/2015 9:08:00 AM
You have so many amazing poems, it must have been hard to choose. It appears you chose well, congratulations!
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Date: 6/28/2015 8:14:00 AM
Congrats for your AWESOME win Linda! ^_^
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Date: 6/28/2015 12:42:00 AM
Love Tim's comment. Part of the pack part of the crew. ha-ha-ha- wait a minute. JUST KIDDING, JUST KIDDING. here's one for the road, JUST KIDDING.
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Date: 6/27/2015 7:51:00 PM
Linda, congrats on your 1st place win with this passionate write! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/27/2015 4:39:00 AM
Oh yes indeed, I sure remember THIS one...It's only like the most popular poem on Poetry Soup EVER and of course, it is already on my fav poems list...Congrats to the Texas Tornado aka 'The Yellow Rose of Texas'...
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Date: 6/27/2015 4:42:00 AM
By the way, can I run in your pack? YOU of course would be the head wolf...
Date: 6/27/2015 3:30:00 AM
written with the passion you bring to poetry Linda Congrats on 1st place hugs
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Date: 6/12/2015 12:30:00 PM
A hunger for passion and instinctive romance!! Written with true feeling. The trick is to keep the fire burning! hugs // paul
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Date: 9/3/2014 11:25:00 PM
Added to my collection. Cheers.
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Date: 6/29/2014 7:12:00 AM
This was really incredible to read, you brought me so close to that fire I almost got burned. Great job.
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Date: 6/14/2014 3:51:00 AM
Well I surely do like the words you laid down here . glad you liked my Chocolate Covered Cherries :)
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Date: 6/4/2014 12:38:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this one, Linda.. The imagery in your poems is amazing!!..Arlene..
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Date: 5/1/2014 9:43:00 PM
Got my fires started by just reading! Fantastic imagery and beautiful thoughts.
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Date: 4/18/2014 9:58:00 PM
Great Poem. I felt like I was in your poem. Awesome. Will keep coming back to read your poetry. I love it, Karen
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Date: 3/26/2014 9:11:00 PM
Excellent imagery and build up -- everything! Flow baby..... Great poem Linda!
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 3/26/2014 9:15:00 PM
This is my WOLFY poem... xox~ Linda
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