Camp 4

CAMP 4

‘If I die, I die.’

The realness of those words
sent a shiver down my spine
as I listened to the climbers.
It was late autumn, 1969.
There was a pause after his words
and each face made the slightest nod
peering deeply into the flames;
Tom Bauman had just soloed the Nose.

Slowly, I began to put pitons into
the face of life, jammed my fist
into fissures, and ascended slowly.
I delighted when my blood dripped
onto the dark diorite veins in the granite.
For this is life and I believe
in the challenge of the ascent and 
the use of a life to outlive it.

It is now the winter of 2014, and
I wander through Camp 4.
I look at the young, intense faces
as they to peer into the flames.
I would share with them what
has been my own first ascent,
but Tom lives on, so I scream
to a startled camp my tribute to life:
‘If I die, I die.’
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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December 15, 2020 at 11:36 AM
Chas, I love the dark, intense, yet vibrant quality of this piece. I especially enjoy the alliteration and duality of the lines "I delighted when my blood dripped onto the dark diorite veins of the granite." Using 'veins' like this was clever. Great job.
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December 15, 2020 at 1:21 AM
This is very Good I like it
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