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Calm and Cool

Far-off dreams down distant streams The heart pumps blood imagination floods Calm and cool musical wake up and breathe ~ soul unsheathed

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Date: 10/28/2023 4:13:00 PM
I welcome the calm and cool, Gershon. Your poem was refreshing, my friend. Bill
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Date: 10/28/2023 7:46:00 PM
Just call me Calvin the Cucumber! On second thought, maybe not...
Date: 10/28/2023 1:52:00 PM
Beautiful words Gershon.
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Date: 10/28/2023 7:47:00 PM
Thank you so much, B.J.
Date: 10/27/2023 5:48:00 PM
Very nice to read today! Ty :)
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Date: 10/28/2023 7:47:00 PM
Nice to see your avatar, Heidi, and thank YOU. ~ Gershon
Date: 10/27/2023 4:34:00 PM
Rest and refresh. I wish it happened every day. This is an excellent poem that made me delve deeper.
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Date: 10/28/2023 7:48:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words about this poem, Hilda! :) gw
Date: 10/27/2023 3:41:00 PM
This flows with lovely rhyme and rhythm.
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Date: 10/28/2023 7:49:00 PM
Appreciate the compliment, Andrea. Have a wonderful weekend! ~ Gershon
Date: 10/27/2023 2:17:00 PM
What a fun write. Now off to dreamland~I do not want to get up... I enjoyed this one. Have a great day/weekend................
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Date: 10/28/2023 7:53:00 PM
Hope you got up to stretch and then to enjoy the weekend, Paula!
Date: 10/27/2023 6:04:00 AM
sleep is the resting place of the soul....nicely done Gershon
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Date: 10/28/2023 7:54:00 PM
Can I quote you on this comment, John. Thanks for the encouragement, gw
Date: 10/27/2023 4:35:00 AM
just lovely, Gershon. Our dreams do allow our imagination to flow. Like a musical, they unveil our soul, our true selves. Although this is short, it resonates with me! Thank you. Have a pleasant day, Sara
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Date: 10/27/2023 3:29:00 AM
Love the flow and meaningful word choice. Great job.
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