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Calm

While fighters ought to be gracious and calm, feeling fury is a sign of weakness. ( By author )

When everything droops in your wake Your stance was hollow; it was fake Your path is fair yet worth the wait That's where you should wander your fate I'd cop through a scene of wanton Key strewn bits are struck by motion Turn over sadly; roots are hay I'm vowing my last breath away. My heart calls for few gouge scorner Truth spoiled on the side of corner I am quite keen to accomplish Fight failed, but never the skirmish Dread sweeps the sight, and the mind stray Smile on the lips once sorrows spray Nose-binds to trust, waive stink disdain Heart falls with each sight; calm remains. Uproar warmly greeted my stride When the grind of routine subside. The pulse dashed at the sight I view And heart was thumping in my chew I breathed to calm my helpless feet "Stay calm and grow on," to my greet From inside, mind is home to loads It's wicked snide skimpy and goads.
Written: January 12, 2022 C Form - Couplet Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France
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Goldsmith Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 9:35 AM
WOW!!! Congratulations on your win with your "Calm" write. A big/beautiful waterfall picture. We all need calm from time to time. Have a blessed day with your win...............
Faulkner Avatar
January 31, 2022 at 2:49 PM
Calm is more treasured after going through turmoil, much wisdom here, congratulations on your placement-
Alex Avatar
January 31, 2022 at 6:12 AM
Great truths and thought-provking reflections. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
George Avatar
January 30, 2022 at 8:32 PM
So happy for you dear friend Lasaad ! Congratulations on your proud win.....
La France Avatar
January 30, 2022 at 2:41 PM
Lasaad, congratulations on your First Place win in my C Forms - Couplet contest with your wonderfully penned poem, I like the quote and the image ~Constance
Poet Avatar
January 30, 2022 at 6:03 PM
Thank you so much for reading, considering, and commenting on my poem; it means a great deal to me and is very appreciated. I hope everything is going well for you. Peace and best wishes to you.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 8:49 AM
Nicely written, Lasaad, as your couplet truly portrays its theme. My best to you my friend and stay safe, Aloha!
Buhagiar Avatar
January 13, 2022 at 1:05 AM
After some turbulence one cannot but hanker for calm. Great poem and best for a win.
Hankins Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 11:37 AM
Some remarkable images here, Lasaad. I enjoyed reading your poem.
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