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Callous Loving Lingers

Heart shall spark. Outside ocean's bounds Full darkness Our hearts linked Daylight on the windy bay I'll be where you are
Written: January 20, 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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M  Avatar
January 22, 2022 at 7:00 AM
A beautiful poem Lasaad! Debx
Cunningham Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 7:25 AM
The bond between hearts is unbreakable. Tom
Pandit Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 5:27 AM
A romantic environment you painted, Lassad--in pursuit of the beloved.
Buhagiar Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 2:23 AM
Love has a habit of forming a joint connection, be it be calm or rough.
George Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 12:41 AM
Just like hearts are linked, the land and water are eternally connected. Great image and beautiful poem.
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