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Heart shall spark. Outside ocean's bounds Full darkness Our hearts linked Daylight on the windy bay I'll be where you are
Written: January 20, 2022

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Date: 1/22/2022 7:00:00 AM
A beautiful poem Lasaad! Debx
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Date: 1/21/2022 7:25:00 AM
The bond between hearts is unbreakable. Tom
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Date: 1/21/2022 5:27:00 AM
A romantic environment you painted, Lassad--in pursuit of the beloved.
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Date: 1/21/2022 2:23:00 AM
Love has a habit of forming a joint connection, be it be calm or rough.
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Date: 1/21/2022 12:41:00 AM
Just like hearts are linked, the land and water are eternally connected. Great image and beautiful poem.
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