Calling Me

the clear sea shimmers all dark gray thoughts swept away ~ horizons beckon

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 12/21/2020 5:53:00 PM

I think the sea calls us all. Great Haiku, Gershon :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/21/2020 12:11:00 PM

- A great haiku, Gershon :) - Have a wonderful Christmas ... and a virus-free new year 2021 :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/21/2020 5:27:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise. Hope you are well! Tidings of Joy, Gershon

Bobby May

Date: 12/21/2020 4:39:00 AM

Not to bad GW it caught my attention, lol I love the first line!! well done my friend! Cheers and happy whatever you celebrate, me myself and I are still stuck with Santa Clause, lol

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/21/2020 7:57:00 AM

Bobby, thanks for a spot-on comment. Matter of fact, I like the first line the best --- much better than the second, which I just couldn't quite get right... And whatever I celebrate, I'll think of poor Bobby with Santa digging his claws into your side. lol. Merry X-mas, buddy! Tidings of joy, Gershon

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/20/2020 8:34:00 PM

Hi Gershon, You've created such a soothing and serene scene. A new dawn is on the way. Well done:-) Alexis

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/21/2020 8:30:00 PM

What a nice thing to say; your haiku is amazing:-) Alexis

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/21/2020 5:18:00 PM

Ooh! Such an exquisite comment, Alexis: 'A new dawn is on the way.' I like your comment better than my haiku!! Appreciate your kind words. Season's Cheer, Gershon

Panagiota Romios

Date: 12/20/2020 7:53:00 PM

Very, cool. I get the picture PAngie

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/21/2020 5:15:00 PM

Thank you for the very cool comment, PAngie. Peace on Earth, Gershon

Brandy Nicole

Date: 12/20/2020 7:20:00 PM

"Horizons beckon" Me. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. There is something magical about the sea. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/21/2020 5:14:00 PM

Now you've really boosted my stock, Brandy. Consider: If 'my thoughts brings a smile,' imagine what my actual poems might do! lol. Tidings of Joy, Gershon