Notes About The Poem

The poem “Called a Sin” is about the trials and relief of self-medication.

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Called a Sin

Don’t ask the gods if they sent
sedatives to cure the pain
those aches of body’s frame
or the trials of mind’s domain

indulgence in the medicine
not prescribed but still pursued
by the drink or much more
addressing woes all deplore

removing more than agony
when composure is reduced
inebriation of the whole
in pursuit of the profane

to be wasted is called a sin
this sacrament now denied
even as the misery
demands a world that’s more humane.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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December 23, 2024 at 9:06 AM
It’s a slippery slope for some. But the trials and tribulations of self medication should not be taken lightly. So much is determined by the setting and space. Our worlds influence our every touch. I enjoyed your thought evocative writing style. I hope to read more of your work. Also I love the effort with the video and image submission. You take pride in your work.
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