weitten 18/01/2026
Suzette Richards contest
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8 syllables x3 followed by 5 syllables line
to look at her each day I went, saw her first when she paid me rent, staring at her was time well spent, ……so near yet so far! should have proposed that very day, my dad said what I could not say, she now loves me motherly way, ….. and yet here we are! Premier Contest Winner 5
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