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California Poppy

Her seed is tossed into the wind Whirled from palms of nature's hand By helter skelter randomness The green and brown become a bliss Scattered poppies across the land Like butterflies, their beauty graces The hills, valleys, and roadside places A world comes alive with a golden glow Like polished gems, where weeds would grow Those scattered seeds will multiply Take root, add warmth under summer skies The beauty of her heart of gold Will bloom with orange, so bright and bold In winter storm a sleep begins Until the thaw, when rains begin A state is proud to bear her bloom Her beauty never comes too soon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/10/2011 7:23:00 PM
Another poetic gem. Vince
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Date: 7/3/2010 12:19:00 AM
Very colorful poem, delightful and pretty. Congrats for the winner circle. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/2/2010 10:42:00 PM
Congratulations carrie on your poem's success in Rp's contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/2/2010 1:11:00 PM
The poppy is delightful in it's colours, but sadly tainted with the drug world. You have taken this species to a higher level with your words Carrie. Many congratulations on your deserved win in Constance's lovely contest >> James
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Date: 7/2/2010 10:19:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your poem being in the spotlight in A Rambling Poet's contest "The Flower". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/1/2010 8:34:00 PM
What a beautiful poem for an equally beautiful flower! Congrat's on your HM!~Tirzah~
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Date: 7/1/2010 8:12:00 PM
Yes she is certainly a staunch lttle flower and beautiful too. Congratulations on your win with her. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/1/2010 7:04:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your HM in the Flower contest for this wonderful write and lovely flower.. as I have been on Kauni the Garden Isle today amongst so many gorgeous flowers .. amazing.. to see.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. enjoy ..AlohA...
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Date: 7/1/2010 12:54:00 PM
Every poem you write is a magical dream dear!C
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Date: 6/30/2010 9:21:00 AM
Such a lovely poem about a truly beautiful power that multiplies quickly and produces a lovely landscape, Carrie. Great entry for the flower contest and I wish you success! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/30/2010 5:59:00 AM
Your poem reminds of our holidays in Portugal in 1999. Great landscape with lots of poppies and wild herbs! Beautifully composed poem, Carrie! And thank you for your friendly comments.:) Gert
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Date: 6/29/2010 10:52:00 PM
Beautiful. Love the imagery and thoroughness of description. One of the best.
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Date: 6/29/2010 9:14:00 PM
It's a great write with nice images and equally good rhymes
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Date: 6/29/2010 9:13:00 PM
No surprise here - another terrific poem from the master herself. Great job Carrie. Joem
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