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California Or Bust

California or Bust My girl, California gave me her trust unwilling she with the aspect of lust but she soon would rejoice when she gave me a choice I could explore California or Bust Bawdy Limerick Poetry Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin California or Bust May 19, 2019

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Jack Horne

Date: 6/6/2019 3:21:00 PM

lol, love this clever limerick

Ralph Sergi
Date: 6/8/2019 8:10:00 AM

Thank you, Jack

Paul Callus

Date: 5/29/2019 5:05:00 PM

This is one of the best/clever bawdy Limericks that I have come across so far, Ralph! Your play on words is superb. ~ Regards // paul

Ralph Sergi
Date: 5/29/2019 8:19:00 PM

Thank you, Paul It just came to me

Jan Allison

Date: 5/27/2019 5:35:00 AM

so lovely to see your fun side Ralph love the innuendo and word play here, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Ralph Sergi
Date: 5/29/2019 8:20:00 PM

Thank you, Jan I'm proud f myself.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 5/25/2019 7:29:00 AM

Hi Andrea: Think of it as a geography lesson (smile)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/24/2019 9:29:00 PM

ha, My thoughts went to what Carolyn said as well. There is lots to explore of California!

Ralph Sergi

Date: 5/24/2019 2:40:00 PM

Hi Carolyn: You are very perceptive (ha ha)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/24/2019 2:34:00 PM

By all means, I think she wants you to explore her "Bust." ;) Trust is always hard to build in a relationship. Got a good laugh from your poem, Ralph! Hugs, Carolyn