Ralph Sergi Poet Limerick

California Or Bust

California or  Bust

My girl, California gave me her trust
unwilling she with the aspect of lust
but she soon would rejoice 
when she gave me a choice
I could explore California or Bust

Bawdy Limerick Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Tania Kitchin
California or Bust
May 19, 2019

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Jack Horne June 6, 2019 at 3:21 PM lol, love this clever limerick Ralph Sergi June 8, 2019 at 8:10 AM Thank you, Jack

Paul Callus May 29, 2019 at 5:05 PM This is one of the best/clever bawdy Limericks that I have come across so far, Ralph! Your play on words is superb. ~ Regards // paul Ralph Sergi May 29, 2019 at 8:19 PM Thank you, Paul It just came to me

Jan Allison May 27, 2019 at 5:35 AM so lovely to see your fun side Ralph love the innuendo and word play here, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Ralph Sergi May 29, 2019 at 8:20 PM Thank you, Jan I'm proud f myself.

Ralph Sergi May 25, 2019 at 7:29 AM Hi Andrea: Think of it as a geography lesson (smile)

Andrea Dietrich May 24, 2019 at 9:29 PM ha, My thoughts went to what Carolyn said as well. There is lots to explore of California!

Ralph Sergi May 24, 2019 at 2:40 PM Hi Carolyn: You are very perceptive (ha ha)

Carolyn Devonshire May 24, 2019 at 2:34 PM By all means, I think she wants you to explore her "Bust." ;) Trust is always hard to build in a relationship. Got a good laugh from your poem, Ralph! Hugs, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud May 21, 2019 at 7:30 PM ralph, you naughty guy, lol... make it PG-18!... enjoyed..huggs Ralph Sergi May 21, 2019 at 8:18 PM I'll settle for PG 20, NETTE!

Tom Cunningham May 20, 2019 at 2:05 AM I'm told California is a nice place for exploring.lol. Good luck. Tom Ralph Sergi May 20, 2019 at 10:57 AM Hi Tom: I was told to be bawdy but not naughty! Check your soup mail.

Caren Krutsinger May 20, 2019 at 1:57 AM Ralph, you have made this limerick the exact right "level of bawdy". Good luck in the contest! Ralph Sergi May 20, 2019 at 10:59 AM Hi Caren: Sometimes it is difficult to reach that level but what the ......... (hey)