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Cakes Got a Beef

When a student is on the verge of surpassing the teacher, there always comes a flashpoint of conflict Giving way to superior intellect is a difficult thing to concede The elder acquiescing to the younger is a most vexing deed Thus was the case with the Baby and her mentor, Miss Queen Eleanor Her parents didn’t call her Baby, they called her Infant Eyes ... because she was so young to be so wise But, Miss Eleanor called her Cakes, because she was the baby of the Queen’s Mensa brood: A smart, brainiac crew that reeked havoc on all educational protocols, old and new And their leader was Cakes — the alpha that stirred this cerebral beta stew But when Cakes started to spread her mental wings, she got into a major beef with the Queen Cakes theorized a mathematical shortcut through the temporal flux algorithm prime; espousing a new law of quantum thermodynamics, that would allow humans to transverse space in half the time The Queen knew she was cornered into a checkmate, and in the final analysis Cakes would win But she fought long and hard, skin for skin Making sure the new theory would hold up, withstand all challenges in the end Thereby forcing Cakes to acknowledge her as a worthy adversary and mentor Now Cakes, like all great pioneers before — once creatively unbound, are intellectually free to explore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/12/2017 9:27:00 AM
Excellent and profound. You have that unique skill of beating the peak. This is a wonderful stuff, always beating our expectation. Can wait to jump to your next page.
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Date: 7/11/2017 9:41:00 PM
A very astute poem my friend. It’s when the clever student surpasses the teacher’s knowledge then success can be proudly claimed. If the student does not surpass the teacher the teacher has failed. But there comes a point also when the teacher cannot let the student get too 'big for their boots', or ego creeps in....Maria
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Date: 7/11/2017 12:40:00 PM
Nice poem highlighting the excellence of creative spirit ... Read with interest ...
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Date: 7/11/2017 11:37:00 AM
Very cool, a creative in depth story that really brings your characters to life my friend. What a blast to read.
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