Cake

"Life is too short to say no to cake." - Author unknown

A chocolate, vanilla-
sweet kiss on the tongue. 
Rich icing between layers.
For celebrations,
or just a sweet treat.
A treasured -
gift
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
May 4, 2025 at 1:45 PM
Thanks for the awesome contest. This one would get a prize from ME!
Kitchin Avatar
May 4, 2025 at 7:08 PM
Andrea. thank you.
Dutta Avatar
April 26, 2025 at 9:28 PM
Oh ! Nice. Though I have sugar problem, I am addicted to any sweet. Have Good Days.
Kitchin Avatar
April 27, 2025 at 4:43 AM
Anisha, thank you.
Buhagiar Avatar
April 21, 2025 at 2:21 AM
Darn I'm diabetic. Still loved your cake. Must invent a sugar free.
Kitchin Avatar
April 21, 2025 at 4:20 AM
Victor, thank you and they do have them sugar-free but not as good.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 20, 2025 at 9:22 AM
Your "Cake" is a wonderful write. Guess cake is at your house. I will be right over. Hahaha!!! Have a Fun and Blessed Easter Day eating cake.............
Kitchin Avatar
April 20, 2025 at 1:22 PM
Paula, thank you.
Daniel Avatar
April 20, 2025 at 7:27 AM
So lovely, I love cake, yours sounds yummy, Tania:)
Kitchin Avatar
April 20, 2025 at 1:23 PM
Joanna, thank you.
Allison Avatar
April 19, 2025 at 12:09 PM
I just love the quote and the poem is making my mouth water Tania! hugs jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
April 19, 2025 at 2:34 PM
Jan, thank you. -hugs
Lane Avatar
April 19, 2025 at 10:10 AM
I don't think I've ever written this form, but I will give it a go. Every sweet treat is a treasured gift to me.
Kitchin Avatar
April 19, 2025 at 11:00 AM
Lin, so pleased you will write for the contest. -hugs
Brotherton Avatar
April 19, 2025 at 9:02 AM
Chocolate, vanilla, strawberry. If it's sweet, it's my kind of food.
Kitchin Avatar
April 19, 2025 at 10:59 AM
Jerry, I concur. Thank you.
Empress Avatar
April 19, 2025 at 6:59 AM
I agree, and is why im a chocoholic, always up for chocolate cake! Love this! I didnt know this form, would love to give it a try! Best wishes, pleasure reading this dear tani.
Kitchin Avatar
April 19, 2025 at 7:06 AM
IE, thank you. I hope you write one for the contest.
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