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Caifornia's Defeat Ups and Downs

California’s hospitals are filling up, nurses getting sick Thanksgiving has given us more than pumpkin pies Young and arrogant, young and unaware Elderly desperate visiting old friends Fearful it might be for many all of their final ends It was for some though it should not have been So Christmas’s coming -- will people connect with the Divine Or with Macy’s and Penney’s and Amazon Prime Fixed in their homes with children playing computer games As jailed husbands and wives are fighting with too much time Doctors and families crying out on these unhappy days Plague or virus a negative life that creates dark ways so many people getting sick nearby rewrote a little sigh partical rhyming

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Date: 2/1/2021 6:37:00 AM
Difficult days for sure.
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Date: 1/2/2021 3:56:00 AM
I have to tell you, my husband and I have been sheltered in place since March, and we are pretty much DONE with all of this togetherness so this line resonated with me. " jailed husbands and wives are fighting with too much time" It is SO true!
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Linda Milgate
Date: 1/5/2021 7:31:00 PM
sorry, same here!! Reading and watching TCM old movies!! Take care.
Date: 12/22/2020 11:40:00 AM
This morning's newspaper reports 60,000 homeless in Los Angeles, a centre of wealth, but it appears the homeless are not the ones crowing hospitals. Aloha! Rico
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Linda Milgate
Date: 1/1/2021 10:34:00 AM
It such a strange problem, I keep thinking just have enough living areas why not, our country has the funds. We need to have some old fashion boarding homes too. If I get sicker and husband overwhelmed that would be a good option. Not every homeless person wants to or can deal with an apartment. Need a combination.
Date: 12/22/2020 2:14:00 AM
021 is going to be dreadful if this virus becomes stronger. Let's pay for better days. ~~
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Linda Milgate
Date: 1/1/2021 10:35:00 AM
To better days!!! and kindness
Date: 12/21/2020 5:19:00 PM
You have captured what has happened and is continuing. 2020 has been a sad year for our country. Thank you.
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