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Written July 11 2026 for contest Inward Journey sponsor  Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

 

 

Cactus Flower

Parts of me are deep as the seas 
Black when mad green when envious
Blue when sad and lacking love’s liquor 

There was a time when in yellow youth
I sang satin songs with a silver silky voice
How naive I was to believe in denim dreams

Then red heart beat boisterously brown
And you couldn’t tell me music wasn’t it
That I’d not be a star some distant day

Then beautiful life happened and I grew 
Desires changed as well as violet virtues
For mahogany motherhood is full of stars

Stars who create church hymns as lullabies 
And original purple praise dances at
Babies firsts the first smiles steps words 

I learned that only two men would ever 
Love
Me

My God and 
My
Son who is indeed my sun

The journey of my inner soul has been 
Eye opening and full of lessons 
Licorice lessons in black love
Lemon lessons in loss
Lavender lessons in peach patience 

I no longer grow turquoise taller in height 
But in spirit in mind perhaps 
A little more wise

The desert that is my love life
Has a beautiful cactus flower
That only God can touch

I am content
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September 14, 2026 at 2:29 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful contest win, Karen, with this very well composed poem.
Jones Avatar
September 14, 2026 at 2:42 PM
Thank you Sotto!
Johnson Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 4:44 AM
This is powerful. I felt the journey that Fail to take control of you. That last line, "I am content", has the aroma of Peace and victory. Continued blessings.
Jones Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 5:16 AM
😊 Curtis thanks for reading and for your kind comment!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 11, 2026 at 11:51 AM
WOW!!! What a write you have here. Loved reading this one. Yes, "My God and My Son who is indeed my sun." What a great line. You are a beautiful cactus flower/writer. Great Ending... "Good Luck" Have a Lovely/Blessed Weekend Writing Away................
Jones Avatar
July 11, 2026 at 12:39 PM
What you see in me is your own reflection beautiful Paula flower. Thank you for sharing.
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