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If You ever get to the stage that you believe in your own genius; remember there was a time when you were still trying not to poo your pants
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September 27, 2015 at 9:32 AM
Congrats on your win Bill! Very funny.
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September 24, 2015 at 11:44 AM
Bill, Congrats on your win. Another interesting contest. LOVE SKAT
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September 22, 2015 at 3:10 PM
Congrats on your win with this poem Bill,well done
Nance Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 7:40 AM
Lol...that is so true...nice one...and grats on your win!
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September 22, 2015 at 1:45 AM
I haven't done one that shape for a while. Or a poem. Congrats on a fine write, Bill. Regards, Viv
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September 22, 2015 at 12:19 AM
Congrats on ur very witty winning write!
Fisher Avatar
September 21, 2015 at 8:11 PM
Nice shapely poem, Bill. Congrats are in order!
Roper Avatar
September 21, 2015 at 8:06 PM
Awesome win Hugs Eve
Costales Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 10:04 AM
a humbling statement for any one who thinks he has reached the peak of whatever career he has - remembering beginnings. Shape is a triangle?
Lindsay Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 11:53 AM
Oh dear, that didn't work - the form was meant to represent a '>' shape
Lindsay Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 11:49 AM
Yes - the shape enhances the journey, although it may have been better thus : If You ever get to the stage that you believe in your own genius; remember there was a time when you were still trying not to poo your pants ... thereby illustrating that what goes around comes around ;)
Nance Avatar
August 14, 2015 at 2:25 PM
ha so true!
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