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Cabin Time - Simple Pleasures

Take me back to the cabin, cabin in my mind
The place we go to be alone, I need cabin time. 
Only we can make it happen, we know where to go
Take me back, oh take me back, I need you so

The look you give me when it is cabin time
A wink that says 'I want you' in the cabin in my mind
Just the thought of your skin barely touching mine
Makes me want you so much, I need cabin time

Summers we go swimming, moonlight on skin.
Campfire flames passion again and again
Making love on beach makes our bodies glow
Take me back, oh take me back, I need you so

Winters we stay inside our rhythm making heat
We love by the fireplace never missing a beat
Our bodies keep us warm all through the night
Only cabin time makes everything feel right

Take me back to the cabin, cabin in my mind
The place we go to be alone, I need cabin time
Only we can make it happen, we know where to go
Take me back, oh take me back, I need you so

Revised from Cabin Time posted 1-15-2016
Simple Pleasures Contest by Kim Merryman
Sixth Place

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Poet Destroyer A February 3, 2016 at 3:18 AM Susan, Congrats on your wonderful win. ~LINDA~

Teddy Kimathi January 28, 2016 at 7:41 AM Hi Susan. Thank you for passing by to read my work. Congrats for your placement in this contest!!!! ;-) Susan Gentry January 28, 2016 at 11:31 AM Thank you Teddy! Enjoyed.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 28, 2016 at 4:08 AM What a pleasure to read Susan.. congrats on big win! Susan Gentry January 28, 2016 at 11:30 AM Thank you!

Janice Canerdy January 27, 2016 at 8:18 AM A 7 for sure! Congrats on your win with this fervently emotional write. Janice Susan Gentry January 28, 2016 at 11:30 AM Why thank you Janice! So appreciate your comments and a 7!

Skat A January 27, 2016 at 12:04 AM SUSAN, Congrats on your Simple Pleasure win. Hugs ** SKAT ** Susan Gentry January 28, 2016 at 11:28 AM Thank you very much!

Kim Merryman January 26, 2016 at 4:39 PM A romantic and lightly sensuous write! This could easily be turned into a song! Susan, congrats on your placement in my contest and thanks for participating! Love, Kim Susan Gentry January 28, 2016 at 11:27 AM Thank you Kim for picking mine for placement and for the contest. It was fun and challenging.

Anisha Dutta January 18, 2016 at 10:44 AM Excellent composition. Best of Luck. Anisha D Susan Gentry January 28, 2016 at 11:24 AM Thank you Anisha!

Barbara Gorelick January 17, 2016 at 4:20 PM what a lovely poem.. Flows so smoothly and using repitition really enhances the theme. BG Susan Gentry January 28, 2016 at 11:23 AM Thank you Barbara! Appreciate it.

Paul Callus January 17, 2016 at 2:48 PM I can't get away from your pleasurable cabin, Susan! gl in the contest. // paul Susan Gentry January 28, 2016 at 11:32 AM :) Great comment Paul. Thank you.

Robert Lindley January 17, 2016 at 12:10 PM I love the great way you used repetition my friend. I often do that myself. Superb poetry, should do very well in that contest. A7 Susan Gentry January 28, 2016 at 11:22 AM Thanks so much for reading and for such an awesome comment!

Andrea Dietrich January 16, 2016 at 7:07 PM well, Susan, your simple pleasures make mine look quite tame!! GREAT job in the contest. I like how you used the repetition of cabin to emphasize its idea. Be careful you don't get cabin fever! Susan Gentry January 28, 2016 at 11:21 AM :) Thanks Andrea! Yours is totally awesome as always.

Jan Allison January 16, 2016 at 12:28 PM It sounds idyllic Susan... such lovely romantic sensuous imagery !!! good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Susan Gentry January 28, 2016 at 11:16 AM Thank you Jan! Appreciate your comments.

Constance La France January 16, 2016 at 12:23 PM Susan, your cabin life sounds divine , excellent write Susan Gentry January 28, 2016 at 11:16 AM Thank you :)

Nette Onclaud January 16, 2016 at 12:22 PM a treasure of happy moments which make life truly spectacular, susan..huggs Susan Gentry January 27, 2016 at 1:24 AM Thank you, nette!