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 No bigger than a drop of blood on a finger 
pricked by a thorn, it marches along 
the stem of a rosebush; a Grenadier guard 
in its crimson uniform, with seven spots exactly
splashed across its coat. Not a random 
flick of a paintbrush, but like a soldier’s
chevron; its rank, its classification.

It rises ready to do battle with the greenfly
that hide amongst soft petals until
confronted with my outstretched fingers
onto which it clambers. I hold it aloft
and blow a soft breath across its tiny body.
Its wings fan open and like a fire-rescue helicopter,
it flies away home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 10/29/2020 11:09:00 PM
Rena, you write so eloquently of the ladybug, easily my favorite member of the insect family. I even nicknamed my daughter Ladybug, a name I still enjoy calling her, after 28 years. You set the stage so poetically with 'no bigger than a drop of blood on a finger pricked by a thorn'. Entirely delightful I enjoyed reading and re-reading this gem today. ~ John
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Rena Ong
Date: 10/29/2020 11:26:00 PM
thank you for such kind words. us daughters treasure our dad's nicknames. Ladybug is a nice one, thank you for sharing that.
Date: 10/28/2020 6:34:00 AM
Lovely imagery of the ladybird bug here. Very descriptive... Thanks for sharing! I always put them onto my roses to try to get them to eat the greenfly and whitefly. Then they always seem to fall off.
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Rena Ong
Date: 10/28/2020 7:08:00 AM
Probably ate too many:) tks for enjoying the poem
Date: 10/28/2020 2:49:00 AM
Hi Rena, I see you must be new here. Welcome! I am enjoying your 3 poems immensely. You seem to have some skill. I would love to see you extend and expand your endings. It is refreshing to see something new under the sun. Keep on writing. Great stuff! Earl
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Rena Ong
Date: 10/28/2020 3:05:00 AM
Thank you for such kind words. Will take a look at the endings. :) i am always concerned i wobble on and on! Yes late bloomer??
Date: 10/27/2020 12:56:00 PM
The ladybird so pretty dressed in a coat of red, speckled with black spots that add to her finesse. I so loved those little tiny bugs when I was a young girl, and I enjoyed the sonnet and those beautiful words... Belle :-)
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Date: 10/7/2020 9:03:00 AM
Beautiful penning of the mighty lady bug! Linda
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Rena Ong
Date: 10/7/2020 2:57:00 PM
Thanks linda. Glad you knew which bug:)
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