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They slipped away
One by one
The bygone days
Of summer

Forgotten windchimes
Gently tingled
To the breezes ringing
Their last serenade

Wispy sunlight
Resisted giving way
To hurling winds
And skies darkened


 
Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~BYGONE DAYS OF SUMMER~ 2020

AP: 3rd place 2022

Submitted on April 8, 2020 for contest STRAND POETRY PICK 5 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST

Originally posted on October 2, 2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 10/3/2019 11:03:00 AM
i hear those windchimes today as the rain pushes the warmth of summer out of view again... nice one Line, beautiful penning :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/3/2019 12:23:00 PM
It is a hard transition... Thanks for your visit and comment, Sandra.
Date: 10/3/2019 10:59:00 AM
A sad image of the windchime... great imagery ~
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/3/2019 12:23:00 PM
Hello There, thanks for your visit and compliment.
Date: 10/3/2019 12:29:00 AM
Lovely visuals ...
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/3/2019 12:24:00 PM
Thank you, Probir. Much appreciated.

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