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Bye Bye Fly

Today I saw a pesky fly
He buzzed around all day …
Until he landed on my lunch
So I zapped him with fly spray!


Now you’re really in the sky
Rest in peace little fly

Jan Allison
9th November 2014

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2014

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Joel Thornton Date: 12/10/2014 7:12:00 AM LOL.. this is cute and clever.. good job.!~Joel Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/10/2014 8:05:00 AM Thanks Joel:-) Hugs Jan xx

Emily Hinchman Date: 11/12/2014 7:59:00 PM Very funny, great poem!! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/12/2014 8:01:00 PM Thanks Emily:-) Hugs Jan xx

Fabiyas M V Date: 11/11/2014 7:39:00 AM Well done, Jane Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/11/2014 7:53:00 AM Thanks Fabias:-) hugs jan xx

Maurice Yvonne Date: 11/10/2014 5:06:00 PM Did you even try to fictitiously resuscitate the fly? Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/10/2014 5:14:00 PM no lol:-) hugs Jan x

Maurice Yvonne Date: 11/10/2014 4:45:00 PM Did you even try to resuscitate the fly? Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/10/2014 4:56:00 PM Maurice ... it's fiction ... so no lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne Date: 11/10/2014 4:44:00 PM Great write! (Except for the part where the poor fly dies.) Hope this does well in the the dead bug contest. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/10/2014 4:52:00 PM If i run a contest maybe I could submit this write and give myself first place:-) Hugs jan xx

Maurice Yvonne Date: 11/10/2014 4:41:00 PM If you pull the wings off a fly does it become a walk. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/10/2014 4:51:00 PM ha ha ha:-) you should be on the stage my friend:-) Hugs jan xx

Maurice Yvonne Date: 11/10/2014 4:39:00 PM Good you said this is fiction. Other wise I would have to report you to the animal cruelty association. Why does everyone keep saying I hope you didn't eat the sandwich. Bug spray makes a great sandwich spread and how did everyone know your lunch was a sandwich. Poor fly will their be a service I would like to attend. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/10/2014 4:50:00 PM Lol Maurice thanks for dropping by:-) Hugs jan xx

M. L. Kiser Date: 11/10/2014 2:01:00 PM I'm crack'in up! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/10/2014 2:18:00 PM LOl M L :-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud Date: 11/10/2014 6:06:00 AM this happens especially during summer in my country... a fun, winsome write, jan.. spray away!.. huggs Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/10/2014 7:44:00 AM lol I prefer flies to wasps lol -this was merely a fun write - nof fun for the poor fly of course! Hugs Jan x

Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/10/2014 12:49:00 AM I hope you didn't eat the sandwich *lol*. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/10/2014 1:12:00 AM Its pure fun write Richard:-) Although death isn't a fun subject!!!!! hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/9/2014 11:23:00 PM hahahaha. Is this also a metaphor for something else?? I really LIKES it. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/10/2014 1:11:00 AM LOl No Andrea ... but it could be!!! Hugs Jan xxx

Eve Roper Date: 11/9/2014 6:39:00 PM Ha ha.... good for you Jan, I hope the sandwich ended up in the trash :) love and hugs dear friend eve Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/10/2014 1:09:00 AM Its just a fun write lol Hugs jan xx

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/9/2014 6:26:00 PM I hope you didn't eat that sandwich lol Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/10/2014 1:09:00 AM It's total fiction Brenda:-) lol Hugs jan xx

Robert Stoner Jr Date: 11/9/2014 5:39:00 PM Great write sometimes the least says the most. Much enjoyed Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/9/2014 5:41:00 PM Thanks so much Robert:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus Date: 11/9/2014 4:52:00 PM Very entertaining, Jan! I suppose a fly on lunch becomes 'luncheon meat'. Now, how come we go hunting flies and afterwards we feel sorry for them!!! Sentimentalists! hugs // paul Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/9/2014 4:54:00 PM Oh wish I'd had a fly swatter when we were on Gozo Paul - oh the flies were in full force when we were sitting outside eating :-( Hugs Jan xx

James Fraser Date: 11/9/2014 4:45:00 PM Mm, buzz off or splat, it means the same. But the Sandwich down the drain - I'm smiling because I'm not a Fly :) xx Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 11/9/2014 4:56:00 PM Ah! the Blonde ;-) Jan Allison Date: 11/9/2014 4:50:00 PM :-) thanks James - am still giggling at your poem :-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith Date: 11/9/2014 3:00:00 PM Poor fly....luckily it is fictional.....hugs Tim Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/9/2014 3:06:00 PM :-) Hugs Jan xx

David Meade Date: 11/9/2014 2:17:00 PM The fly said: "though you won today the war is not over -- we will be back!" Nicely done Ms. Jan -- may all your days be fly-free. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/9/2014 2:19:00 PM Thanks David :-) hugs Jan xx

Jack Horne Date: 11/9/2014 2:12:00 PM lol, the question is: did you still eat your lunch? Thanks for a laugh. Really loved your poem with Andrea too - big congrats on that, my friend x Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/9/2014 2:13:00 PM Thanks Jack - its purely a fictional write and thanks for the comment about Peter Pumpkin - we had fun writing it and I am honoured to have worked with Andrea she is awesome and so inspirational:-) Hugs jan xx

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/9/2014 2:07:00 PM Cute one..Got a chuckle..I guess that lunch was ruined..Enjoyed reading this one today...Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/9/2014 2:09:00 PM Thanks Sara:-) Hugs Jan xx

Gary Bateman Date: 11/9/2014 1:54:00 PM Jan, I really like this one -- So Cute!! What happened to your lunch?? (HA! HA!) Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 11/9/2014 1:57:00 PM Purely fiction Gary:-) Hugs Jan xx