Bye Bye

Once I said hello to sadness, I bid farewell to happiness. 10-11-16

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CayCay Jennings

Date: 10/11/2016 2:36:00 PM

How many sad lines must I bear today from you, young lady? I'm confused 'cause I thought the 1st I read was for the contest, but finding this 2nd one makes me think someone hurt you who I must now go beat up. What's up? Whatever the depth of sad realness, I know you would never refuse to let joy back in. If in pain, grow from it. Is there going to be a 3rd on the new poem list? Yi ... CayCay

Alexis Y.
Date: 10/11/2016 3:05:00 PM

Hi CayCay, I only wrote two. There's no third. They were written for the contest and they're pure fiction. I appreciate your concern though:-) Alexis