Bye Bye

BYE BYE Jet plane’s swish Zipper across the blue How I wish I were going with you.

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Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/16/2017 4:02:00 PM

great poem, sidney! you've said so much in just a few perfect words...

Sidney Beck
Date: 3/17/2017 1:17:00 PM

Great to have your support Ilene......yeah this wee verse just came from nowhere as I was idly gazing into the sky and saw a con trail from some high flying plane.....looked remarkably like a zipper opening up the sky hahaha...........best wishes and thanks

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 3/16/2017 12:09:00 PM

Fabulous write! As potent as it is brief, well done! 7 :)

Sidney Beck
Date: 3/16/2017 2:59:00 PM

thanks for liking my poem Maureen....I always appreciate someone who takes time to comment.........best wishes