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Straight lines In order Perfect until one One jagged line Searing pain Too much red So much black Losing too much of me Life pouring out Time passing too slowly Screaming, shouting Its too deep Went too far Fear Anger Emotions pour in No escape Walls come up Trapping me inside Help me... Bye life Bye school Especially bye to you I'll miss you You will me miss me too In my last hours I reflect on my life Too much mistakes Many wrong choices I wil miss you all I went too far Cut too deep My life runs out Staining the floor Pooling on the ground I only have one last thing to say to you all Bye

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/4/2009 6:30:00 AM
Amazing poetry, congrats!! Love Light Truth Patty
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Date: 10/2/2009 12:27:00 PM
Roxie, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/25/2009 6:56:00 PM
Roxie, I just wanted to drop by and add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/24/2009 10:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Roxie. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/23/2009 2:53:00 PM
great poem Roxie, filled with emotions . congrats on your featured this week.
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Date: 9/23/2009 10:26:00 AM
Unbelievable imagery here, Roxie. Powerful write to remind us how fragile life for some can be. An interesting selection to be featured this week here at the Soup!! Congratulations on an outstanding write.
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Date: 9/23/2009 6:08:00 AM
We don't realize how much we want to live until we almost die. congratulations on your feature of the week, dear Roxie. LIFE IS VERY PRECIOUS.
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Date: 9/22/2009 8:01:00 PM
Roxie, congrats on your feature this week...Raul
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Date: 9/22/2009 6:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week Roxie >>James
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Date: 9/21/2009 3:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Roxie. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/20/2009 7:03:00 PM
Profound and emotional. This poem captivated. Well done!! -ED-
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Date: 9/20/2009 5:43:00 PM
The emotion comes through your words in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 2/11/2009 1:49:00 AM
Roxie...a really good one... filled with great emotions! you have a beautiful talent! ~ Arany
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