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By the Waves of the Insane One

Oh, I do hope that she goes along with me
In the woods, by the waves of the insane one
Maybe she will venture beyond brokenly
And maybe over the darkness and be gone
Perchance she’ll see me, exactly as I am
Man who’s devoted to taking the exam
Not just in lust, but with romance at all sides
We will be in love, passion we will abide

Russell Sivey

Copyright © Russell Sivey | Year Posted 2013

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Sara Kendrick Date: 1/7/2013 4:08:00 PM Interesting write..Not sure of the exact interpertation but it seems to have a romantic touch..Thanks for stopping by..The work that you were asking about is a type of Poulter's Measure...Emily Dickinson used that stlye a great deal in her work..It is also called a type of Ballard but can't remember what..It is like this:a, b, c, b rhyme..Measure like this: a eight syllables, b six syllables, c eight syllables, b six syllables..When one adds two lines together they get 14 syllables..Sara Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 1/7/2013 4:10:00 PM About the Canadian Geese Haiku work actually the one that I posted last I wrote first ..It just came to me as I see the Geese eating in the plowed cotton field..Sara

Debbie Duncan Date: 1/7/2013 9:32:00 AM Love the Title,,, nicely done,,, Happy New Year Russell ;} Login to Reply

Joann Grisetti Date: 1/6/2013 1:19:00 PM This poem has really struck me, both romantic and hopeful. Love to read your poems. Login to Reply

Toquyen Harrell Date: 1/6/2013 12:47:00 PM Lol, sounds superb, Russell. May she join you in your insanity :) Awesome! So love it. Login to Reply

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 1/6/2013 11:44:00 AM Wow! may your dreams come true. God bless you. Lucilla Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 1/6/2013 11:40:00 AM hope so Russell, nice xx Login to Reply