By the Water's Edge

Sunscreen could not save our skin,
as dressed in skimpy swimsuits, 
we splished and splashed that afternoon,
so happily slapping the water of the sun-kissed glistening sea,
splattering each other with its salty taste.

Afterward, we swam out into the swell of its waves,
surrendering ourselves to the surges
of the smaller and less dangerous waves,
letting ourselves be totally submerged and tossed like shells,
then swept swiftly back to shore.
Later, we drifted out to the deep,
and then shuddering as the temperature dipped,
we swam to the safety of the beach.

Skipping back to the warmth of sand,
we toweled off and sat, satiated with contentment
to watch sun setting in a sky of cerulean and splendid rose.
Drenched with much peacefulness, 
we watched sun sink lower and lower
at the edge of the shore -
at the edge of that summer
and at the edge of a childhood
we could not know then
was coming to
its end.

April 5, 2019 for Edward Ebeh's Pick A Title, Vol.3 Alliteration Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Doll Avatar
July 4, 2019 at 4:58 PM
Great alliteration. Congratulations on your 1st place win, Andrea. All the best ~ Warren
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 3, 2019 at 4:00 PM
I loved this one Andrea. Congratulations on your first place win! xxoo : )
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 24, 2019 at 2:58 PM
My bet was right. So happy to see this wonderful poem at the top of the winners list Andrea. Kudos on your win! xxoo
Cozart Avatar
April 24, 2019 at 12:55 PM
Congrats on your top finish, Andrea. This is almost a tongue twister!
Allison Avatar
April 24, 2019 at 7:15 AM
such beautiful imagery and great memories Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
Theraven Avatar
April 13, 2019 at 10:12 PM
Andrea, Like the images that you conjured with this poem. Lost in second childhood. -Richard
Lamoureux Avatar
April 8, 2019 at 8:57 AM
A lovely piece!
Callus Avatar
April 7, 2019 at 3:11 PM
Beautiful imagery and sweet memories, Andrea. I enjoyed the alliteration which, though aplenty, does not at all feel overpowering. Were I to come back, I'd be happy to relive it all again! Regards // paul
May Avatar
April 7, 2019 at 3:10 PM
A great depiction of a day at the beach, and of a summer filled with fun, which brings you to the edge of new dawns..Well penned Andrea..Hugs
Kendrick Avatar
April 7, 2019 at 2:59 PM
Ahh!! Coming of age and did not know it and all changed. Enjoyed reading your reminiscing lines. Thanks for dropping by. No, today is not Karter's actual birth date but close. Sara
Daniel Avatar
April 7, 2019 at 10:24 AM
Wow! You always make it seem so easy, Andrea, well done:)
Kiser Avatar
April 6, 2019 at 2:14 PM
I've always loved the beach, the sea; a peaceful place where I have made many childhood memories. A beautiful reminder.
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 11:21 PM
Nicely crafted Andrea. Sad but wonderful ending
Parker Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 5:59 PM
if only to go back, one more time...good luck
Krutsinger Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 2:52 PM
"at the edge of childhood" - exactly! Nicely done.
Michael Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 12:06 PM
Sweet emotions expressed...
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 11:36 AM
You took us back in time with you Andrea. I loved the poetic ending and I bet he will too. A beautiful entry. xxoo : )
Gorelick Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 10:53 AM
Enjoyed your piece. The ending is especially good. BG
Kannan Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 10:43 AM
Lovely memories. So beautiful, Andrea. Good luck in the contest.
Cunningham Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 9:52 AM
Happy memories of times long ago, well written Andrea. Tom
Smith Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 9:25 AM
Had we only known, maybe we would have stayed a while longer. Well done Andrea...
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